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Look at concept, not numbers!Some priests from the temple of Sol were worshipping he light until one noticed a sparkle on top of the temple. Believing it was a gift from Sol the recovered it, unnoticing it was alive. It was stored in a altar and people started to believe it was a Sol's tear. And it became so popular that the Hellbourne thought it was some powerful artifact. Seeing the potential of this skill, Maliken orders the Saboteur to distract the temple guards while he Sand Wraths steal the Sol Tear. But one thing turned out badly. When the Sand Wrath touched it, is started to shine. As soon as it started moving and killed the Sand Wraith trying to steal him. And then it started to defend its temple saving the priests from the Sand Wraiths and from Saboteur bombs. It kept the temple safe until one day, Jereziah asked the priest to bring him the Sol Tear. That night the Hellbourne made another attempt to steal it. And the temple got destroyed. Having no more home, the Sol Tear knew it had to go to battle protecting his most worthy disciple. Jereziah.
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Sol Tear - Legion
Concept:
This is a mix of Meppo with a crazy uncontrollable hero. Normaly you can attack and choose the target, but his skills turn him into a crazy shooting stone. Shooting every enemy in range. Have some well balanced attributes, only favoring Int a little to compensate for so many mana costing skills. The two ult works as a larger number of units attacking, the diference, is the number of units. First one makes more units with smaller dmg and Inner charge, making possible o only target the location they are going, but not their targets and Item effect doesn?t work on them. Second one, is almost like Meppo, turning the hero into u to four units. Dealing smaller dmg and lower chance to trigger item effects based on chance.
Voice/Body Language:
Since it's a stone, is doesn?t speak, only make sparkling sounds. Its body is light blue with a uniform shape.
Movement description:
It moves like a floating and spinning Sol Tear.
Attack description:
The attack is a small charged blue bean. It is charge in front?! Of the Sol Tear and goes to enemy. The Sol Tear can attack while walking.
Words:
On spawn: Sparkling sounds.
Movement: More Sparkling sounds.
Attack: Chrarging and shooting bean sounds.
On death: Glass braking sounds.
Initial attributes / progression:
STR: 20 (2.0 per level) | [COLOR="Red"]AGI:[/COLOR 20 (1.5 per level) Main | INT: 25 (2.5 per level)
Armor: 2.5 | Magic armor: 5.5 | Attack type: Range | Damage: 47 - 52
Move Speed: 300 | Attack Range: 450
Skills:
First skill - Travel/Bang (Active):
The Sol Tear switches to horizontal position and starts spinning, dashing in the targeted direction. After cast, the skill changes do the Bang skill, the Sol Tear exploded dealing damage. After some time the Sol Tear re-unite his shards stunning the enemies inside the radius.
Damage:150/200/250/300 Magic dmg
Effect of Travel: 12/18/24/30% extra MS
Mana Cost: 150/175/200/225
Cooldown: 45/40/35/30 seconds
Travel Range: 700/800/900/1000
Bang radius: 450
Casting time: Instant
Re-unite time: 3/2/1/0 seconds
Stun duration: 1/1/2/2
Special: While in Travel mode, the Sol Tear can still attack and have unit and terrain walking. And after Bang explosion, is Untargetable, Immune, Perplexed, Immobilized and Disarmed.Second skill - Inner charge (Active):
The Sol Tear charges his energies inside himself, attacking really fast. But he can't control all the energy, and attacks randomly all targets in range. He can't hold the energy and start to auto-attack as long as it has energy stored.
Effect: Gains 25/50/75/100% AS for 10 seconds and attacks a random unit in range.
Mana cost: 125/150/175/200
Special: The Sol Tear gets unstopping auto-attacking mode.Third skill - Flash bang (Active):
The Sol Tear lets out a massive light energy, making everyone in range lose sight.
Effect: A strong light emanates fm the Sol Tear making the screen of everyone goes blank, slowly returning back to normal.
Radius: 100% at 450, 75% at 600, 50% at 750 and 25% blank at 900 radius.
Duration: 0.5 to turn blank and 0.5/1/1.5/2 seconds to return to normal.
Mana cost: 125/175/225/275
Obs.: Work like a flash bang(grenade), if you?re near get blinded, you you're far only get a small blur.Ultimate 1 - Big Bang(Active):
The Sol Tear explodes into small Sol Tears that have Inner charge.
Effect: Creates 3/5/7 small Sol Tears that deals 50% of Sol Tear base damage. Item effects don't work on the small Sol Tears.
Mana cost: 200/275/350
Duration: 15 seconds
Cooldown: 120/90/60 secondsUltimate 2 - Multi-Link (Passive):
The Sol Tear is able to divide himself, sharing his attributes and abilities with his brothers.
Effect: Works like Meppo ultimate from DotA. All Sol Tears has 25% less dmg, have 25% less health. When one Sol Tear uses an ability, all the others uses the ability with the same target. Divides into 2/3/4 Sol Tears.
Special: Chance items effect are reduced by 50% as well. (Ex.: 20% crit turns into 10% crit)
Last edited by CavalleroLS; 04-06-2010 at 01:24 AM.
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Come one... Say why you don't liked...
Is he least you can do, after voting no my hero...
Actually, I don't like the way you refered to Meepo. It deserve a better background. And I don't like either Sol Tear name. You describe your hero better than I but it lacks something I can't figure it. Presentation is something important. Anyway rework on it you got a great base.
PS: DON'T USE MY POST AS REFERENCES you'll just screw up your chances of getting votes XD
lol... Ok..Originally Posted by Runesinger
If you look at some of my other heroes, I'm reworking the presentation of them... I just had no time, reworking all of them...
Ganfgarion, Thief, Marksman and Elleanor are reworked, I think... Well anyway...
E refered to Meppo cause it was the closest thing I could find to explaing in a few word his Ult... Sol Tear neither I liked... But couldn't think of a better name... Fell free tu sugest something... XD
But thanks fer the feed back... I'm traying to bring some crazy play style heroes... Soon I'm bringing another guy coming...
Prepare!!!
Update:
Colors and quotes added to make layout better...
Can't find any good icons... If you want to make one or find one good enouth... Tell me!!!
yeah! real nice guy???
well, i liked the skills...
T-up
Not in the mood... So I'll just bump...
I come off as "ehh..." to it, but im not sure why.
Mee too afer I looked it yesterday... lol
A shiny cristal shooting beans isn't so cool...Later I'll be posting it...
I'm having a hard tme creating a new concept for the skill in this one...
So 'll change the mechanics a little... I think it will be a Half-dragon or Dragonborn Mage...
So, any ideas would be very apreciated...
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