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Hey everyone! I've been working on a new hero and I kept on thinking of something that HoN needed and was missing: A female STR Hero!
This is my design:
(DESIGN IS NOT MINE- I found this on DeviantArt)
http://dream.heroesofnewerth.com/her...hadows/Empress
*UPDATE*
After some suggestions, I have updated some of the abilities on this hero that can be found on the Dream page above (LINK)
Please let me know what you think and post any suggestions you may have
Many Thanks![]()
Last edited by OpenShadows; 08-03-2012 at 12:42 PM.
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
BUMP
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
BUMP
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
Hi,
after taking a look over your hero i must admit, that i think shes a bit boring to play. Two passives, that rely on rightclicking and a single target ability, which enhances your rightclicking power is far a far to passive playstyle for my taste. Even magebane is more interesting to play.
Ult seems fine. I do like it.
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
BUMP
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
bump (please, i need some feedback!)
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
BUMP, please need some feedback guys![]()
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
BUMP
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
Bump (need some feedback)
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
After looking at your hero, i really like the synergy between her first and second skill. I just think that the synergy may be a bit to weak, since nobody would auto attack you if youre jumping on them, and you wont even get in range for an auto attack when your enemy jumps you. I think that you need to add that spells also trigger the effect, perhaps even slowing the enemy on the initial effect.
Also, your ulti is just breaking my golden rule. Never, add a possesion skill in a ARTS game. Just never. It may look like a fine concept, but on paper it is completely broken and the most OP skill one can have. Being able to choose the position in HoN is extremely underrated. Therefore, i think you should replace it with a gap-filling ulti, since you pretty much wont be able to do anything in teamfights.
All in all, needs a considerable buff, the radius of your third spell should for example be increased (250 is very low), ulti should be replaced by a gap-filler, and needs a buff on her first spell. By the way, spells are normally organised the way that passives always are at the end of the list of spells. Infernal Power should be on [W] and Revenge should be on [Q]. Oh, and Infernal Power shouldnt fear enemies, since there is a chance that they might run away from you, which really isnt that great. The reason why Maliken and Dampeer have them is mainly because they can follow-up on it.
I really like the concept, but as with Aurelia, she still needs a spice up to be more fun to play. A hero without slows or any kind of gap-filler just is a nono, since they generally are very weak.
Last edited by Elune_; 08-01-2012 at 06:43 PM.
Thanks a lot for your feedback, appreciate it
I will look over her skills and post some updates soon![]()
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
Ok, finally had time to make some changes:
- Increased radius of passive to 450
- Swapped Q and W so passive is on second
- Did a revamp of her ultimate (see first post for updated version)
Thanks for the feedback and tell me what you guys think.
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
Just a tiny typo, the name of both your first and second skills are revenge right now.
Ah, sorry about that :S Fixed itThanks, so what do you think of the update??
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing
Well, im still against mind control in this game, but whatever. Good hero now, i can say that its pretty good IMO atm. In a 1v1 shes pretty heavy, and i like 1v1 concepts.
Oh, thought you could tell I changed it. Her ult doesn't lock her and her target down anymore. Instead it creates a link between them like Empath's Essence Link that breaks off if they get too far away from each other which is why positioning is crucial for her now. Especially her first and third one aswell![]()
Check out my Hero designs:
Aurelia! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...o-Draft-UPDATE
Empress! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...436275-Empress
Titan!: http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...STR-Hero-Draft
Bladewing! : http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/sh...5859-Bladewing