Do you guys like electro/dubstep? Check this out!

[[TrZ]Monttuu]

​I was just wondering if HoN players like these genres if you don't, just ignore this thread.

So I've been practicing music creation for a little time and I've gathered enough courage to start publishing my songs on Youtube. I'd like to get better and for that I need some feedback. Don't really know how to get views -> comments, so I decided to ask you guys I've played HoN for couple of years and I've noticed that quite many people likes electro/dubstep. So, well, if you guys really do like thesegenres, could you check out this song and give some feedback, I'd really appreciate that

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4uTnoj-3N3k

Thanks!
M0nttuu

Ps. Post feedback on Youtube, and if you have songs of your own, feel free to post them below!

[[TrZ]Monttuu]

Don't be shy guys, I know that there are many amateur musicians like me out there!

Anyways, I uploaded new song today, you can find it here:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhWE3pKiwvQ&feature=plcp

It's chillstep this time, what do you guys think of that?

[Grandmont]

i say, not too shabby

[[BnB]JelloBoy]

I have to say it's better than what I was expecting haha, I listened to all your songs, I like.

[WaffleSpider]

The parts between drops are pretty solid. The drops are..well...they would be really good if they were also between drops. Make your drops more epic.

(I mean this as constructive criticism. It's definitely a good start, and I wish I knew more about music production so I could be more specific. They're decent songs and they were fun to listen to.)

[[MH]Bangatron]

The only dub step I like is where it has short dubstep break downs in a a proper song.
Hate were they put 1 line into dubstep mix and say oh its this song....
The cinema dubstep mix is good since its mostly song...

[[TrZ]Monttuu]

Thanks for the feedback guys, really appreciate it Epic drops are my ultimate goal, but making them ain't too easy It might sound simple, but for a beginner like me finding the right combination of sounds and melodies is hard. I'm working on it!

[[TrZ]Monttuu]

I have a new song out! It's DnB style song with real guitar tracks that I recorded myself in it. It's not really what this thread's name is about, but I guess it's a no problem hope you guys like this, I do myself.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rxWB4...&feature=g-upl

PS. There is some footage of me playing!

[[ILL]Mumefi]

About the first song you posted:
the "drop" (its not a real one) at min 1 is realyrealy bad^^ it doesnt sound like itd be part of the song.
Plus some of the beat "pauses" just dont fit.
Your "wubwub"s at 2:20 are ... well ... just wus not wubs^^
The whole thing just doesnt flow... your samples dont fit to each other...
Check dis:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kqGdPJpx4pw
You gotta work on your basics like beat, flow and rhythm(!!!!!!) before working @ details !