Finneus (Jeraziah's Fallen Brother)

[[POD]Rogna]

Finneus

Background

Finneus, the older brother to Jeraziah and Ophelia, was promised the throne by birthright. His father’s last wish was that Jeraziah was to be king, and not Finneus, for he saw the evil in Finneus. Upon hearing this, Finneus was driven mad with rage and pounced on Jeraziah pushing him to the ground, and began pummeling every part of his body. Guards pulled Finneus off of their new king, but could not hold onto Finneus, for he had swollen from all the rage within. Killing with four of the guards with his bare hands, Finneus fled the kingdom, and followed the whispers in his head. He made a pact with Hellbourne casters, and is now a hulking monster of what he used to be.

Advanced Statistics

Affiliation: Hellbourne
Damage: 60-68
Armor: 2
Movespeed: 295
Base Attack Time: 1.7 seconds
Range: Melee
Strength: 25+3.5
Intelligence: 16+1
Agility: 16+1

Thundering Charge

Finneus howls with rage and begins stomping over enemies and through terrain.
Upon activation Fineus gains unit walking and tree walking. Units that Finneus passes through are given the Stomped On debuff. Trees that Finneus passes through are destroyed. A unit cannot be applied the Stomped On debuff if it has been affected by it in the last 2 seconds. Finneus leaves a trail 800 long and 250 wide. Units that pass through this trail are applied the Uneven Ground debuff for as long as they remain in the area of effect, and 1 second afterward. Uneven Ground Debuff slows for 20%.
Mana Cost: 90/100/110/120
Cooldown: 40 seconds
Type: Physical
Duration: 15 seconds
1. Dealt 20 damage. Debuff lasts 1 second. Debuff slows by 10%
2. Dealt 40 damage. Debuff lasts 1.5 seconds. Debuff slows by 15%
3. Dealt 60 damage. Debuff lasts 2 seconds. Debuff slows by 20%
4. Dealt 80 damage. Debuff lasts 2.5 seconds. Debuff slows by 25%


Smash

Finneus raises both massive hands, and smashes his enemy into the ground
This ability is taken directly from Knight Davion. It is his dragon tail.
Mana Cost: 100
Cooldown: 9 seconds
Type: Physical
1. Stunned for 2.5 seconds. 25 damage.
2. Stunned for 2.75 seconds. 50 damage.
3. Stunned for 3 seconds. 75 damage.
4. Stunned for 3.25 seconds. 100 damage.


Bellow

Finneus lets out a roar so vicious that all enemy units flee in terror.
All units within range are applied the terror buff, causing players to briefly lose control over them. Units must run in the opposite direction of Finneus for the duration of the spell.
Mana Cost: 80/90/100/110
Cooldown: 14 seconds
Radius: 350/400/450/500
1. Lasts 1 second.
2. Last 1.75 seconds.
3. Lasts 2.5 seconds.
4. Lasts 3.25 seconds.


Crush

Finneus picks up his enemy and begins to crush him in his arms.
That unit is stunned for the duration. If Finneus is stunned or disabled the spell ends. Finneus may not attack for the duration. Finneus may move as normal and cast spells as normal. Activateable items are disabled for the duration of the spell. Friendly units may attack the unit that is being crushed, but deal half damage. The unit that is being crushed cannot be targeted by spells from allies or enemies.
Mana Cost: 150/200/250
Cooldown: 90 seconds
1. Lasts 2.5 seconds. Deals .5x Finneus’ strength per second
2. Lasts 3.5 seconds. Deals 1x Finneus’ strength per second
3. Lasts 4.5 seconds. Deals 1.5x Finneus’ strength per second.


Change Log
Fixed grammar error in crush (Tuesday, November 10 2009) -Lebeau
Edited Crush a bit (Wednesday, November 11, 2009)

[Lamasu]

Very cool hero. I like the cosmetics of the post too

[TotalBadass]

jereziahs mom was a slut. first ophelia. then this guy.. waooaoaowoa. i guess she passed down healing powers? oh no wait, jereziahs mom has sex with centaur.

[pwnoobkiller]

Taaaaaaaaaaaaaank

[Kazmac]

I like to have sex with centaurz. I had sex with jereziahs mom. I is the true father. It is retarded.

[Mousie1]

nice idea
really dont like the name :S

[[POD]Rogna]

jereziahs mom was a slut. first ophelia. then this guy.. waooaoaowoa. i guess she passed down healing powers? oh no wait, jereziahs mom has sex with centaur.

Hahahaha, he looked normal until he got all crazy on the inside! don't go too hard on the poor lass

[[POD]Rogna]

Bump

[Picture]

Although I am relatively new to the forums (and the game itself) I played DoTA on and off for many years. I like all of the spell and abilities. They are both practical and effected, and fit the theme of the hero. Well done sir!

[[POD]Rogna]

Although I am relatively new to the forums (and the game itself) I played DoTA on and off for many years. I like all of the spell and abilities. They are both practical and effected, and fit the theme of the hero. Well done sir!

Thank you! I created him whilst on a plane (same with Sidorio, on the way back coincidentally), so I'm not sure how the actual numbers scale, but thanks for the post!

[EroticMonkey]

Thundering Charge is like a kraken rush but deals physical damage and slow the enemies ? imo 80 of damage is to low to a level 4 spell

also the ult deals physical dmg or magical ?

good story,lets make the family of jeraziah :P

[[POD]LeBeau]

Um, kay...I like it, but: you never say what the Stomped On debuff does, just the Uneven Ground debuff, and that a unit can't get stomped on more than once in a 2 second period.

Secondly, for his ult, you say "Finneus may attack not attack for the duration." I beg your pardon? I like the ult besides that though, although the idea of him 'porting in, Ulting someone, yelling with terror and then stomping off through the trees is an terrifyingly awesome one. Thumbs up!

[[POD]Rogna]

Um, kay...I like it, but: you never say what the Stomped On debuff does, just the Uneven Ground debuff, and that a unit can't get stomped on more than once in a 2 second period.

Secondly, for his ult, you say "Finneus may attack not attack for the duration." I beg your pardon? I like the ult besides that though, although the idea of him 'porting in, Ulting someone, yelling with terror and then stomping off through the trees is an terrifyingly awesome one. Thumbs up!

What the stomped on debuff is, is the slow in the level of the skill. Thanks for the proof reading!

[[VGF]judeca69]

is that a tank from L4D???^_^ anyways that could improve and the skills were cool cant wait to get this on HON!

[ecoisdead]

i like it. bump!

[`aNarchy]

Crush

Finneus picks up his enemy and begins to crush him in his arms.
That unit is stunned for the duration. If Finneus is stunned or disabled the spell ends. Finneus may not attack for the duration. Finneus may move as normal and cast spells as normal. Activateable items are disabled for the duration of the spell. Friendly units may attack the unit that is being crushed.
Mana Cost: 150/200/250
Cooldown: 90 seconds
1. Lasts 2.5 seconds. Deals .5x Finneus’ strength per second
2. Lasts 3.5 seconds. Deals 1x Finneus’ strength per second
3. Lasts 4.5 seconds. Deals 1.5x Finneus’ strength per second.

Sounds a lot like an old DoTA called BeastRider. Bat Rider has a similar skill now as his ulti, but cannot cast spells while using it. The problem with this was, people could use teleportation skills to tp back to the base/into trees/wherever else. Easily abused.

[DopeLGangeR]

OP OP OP

[[POD]Rogna]

Sounds a lot like an old DoTA called BeastRider. Bat Rider has a similar skill now as his ulti, but cannot cast spells while using it. The problem with this was, people could use teleportation skills to tp back to the base/into trees/wherever else. Easily abused.

Yes, I took the idea straight from Bat Rider. Bat Rider's is ranged, so he doesn't need to get within melee range. Finneus doesn't have a teleport skill, and items are disabled, so he couldn't use a homecoming stone etc. Please read carefully

[Shrieve]

I really like your hero idea; however, I think that you would need to modify either Bellow's duration to not last as long or increase the recast of Crush. From what I would imagine; the combo of Bellow+Crush+item(Shroud or Key) would be too op for ganks.

[Lijern1]

Lets go to the driving range and t it up.