Alt Avatar Contest: Balphagore!

[Jenova26]

Sluggagore

Concept Art



Description & Animations

A big, pale-green leech-like slug with a unproportionally large, catfish-like mouth.

Q - Spews toxic green slime onto his opponents that further and further covers them for the duration of the slow.
(Not sure if this is possible, but it'd be sweet if the slime stayed on them partially until they walk into water)

W - Spits a glob of goo at his target. The glob of goo takes on a life of it's own (like Flubber) and jumps from opponent to opponent when passed

E - Sluggagore becomes fatter and fatter with each corspe consumed. On activation, a small explosion of slime erupts out of Sluggagore and little Sluglings pop out of the pool of sludge and Sluggagore reverts back to his normal, unengorged size. The Sluglings (or Sluggies) look like little green slugs with teeth. They bite their enemies to attack.

R - Sluggagore becomes incredibly fat and explodes in a shockwave of filthy goodness

Attack Animation - Sluggagore throws his head forward and chomps on his target.

Voice & Script

Sluggagore should have deep, raspy, Ray Charles-esque voice and, since he's a giant slug, he should primarily use his super-cool voice to say really odd things (since I don't assume slugs have very intelligent things on their mind):

Q - "Blehhhhhhh" (hard to talk while puking)

W - "Blimey slimey!" or "Have some sludge, ya noob"

E - "Bring on the sluggies!" or "Get outta me ya little bastards"

R - "Slime time live" or "Slime on Newerth"

Random quotes:
"Imma gonna eat you"
"For the meatball"
"Ophelia? I'd hit that"
"Why you no pick me comp scene?"
"I must be from Louisville cause I'm one hell of a slugga"
"Breaky is my cousin"
"DotA2 can't kill ME!"
"Yesterday I ate a Magebane. He ain't all that tough.... but a bit chewy"
"iNsania numba one"

[cementgopher]

BISTRO BALPHAGORE.

1. He would look similar to the original but wearing a full head-chef's white uniform. It would be ripped in a few places and be on fire/ bloody like its been very used. His weapon would be replaced with a rolling pin and his other hand would be a people hand.


2. His vomit would obviously be green with orange bits and instead of corpses he would spit out chicken corpses. His corpse conversion would turn the charges he has into headless chickens that would run around with little meat cleavers above their heads. His silence would either be the same or appear like soup being thrown at the first enemy and then splashing to the others, maybe colored yellow/orange instead of red. His ult would explode (white/grey ring instead of red/orange) setting up small tables with food on them and chairs around him when he has full charges and shout "DINNER IS SERVED!". At less charges it would just explode with the ring. The minions it would spawn would be demon cooked hogs (with apples in their mouths of course) which would waddle similar to the minions that already exist (i like how they are).

3. His voice would sound the same as it is now but with different lines. His half/barfing grunt is quite iconic. Some of his lines would be like.
"ERG... AH.. Cooking.. While EATING!"
"I FEAST"
"They say my special soup is to die for... well everyone who tried it HAS!"
(insert more dinner/death puns)

Regardless of any more lines added, obviously he should still say "ERRR...KORAKADOCK!"



I see someone already put "Pizza Pie Balphogore" and I think that one is awesome too. Obviously the whole chef/cook style Balphagore is not just my idea so please make one that has something to do with Food!!

[Kampec]

Visual:

Stereotypical wizard (wizard hat, short wand, a blue dress with stars on it , big white beard, etc)

Voice:

Old, high voice pitch, basically a clumsy old sorcerer )

Skills:

Regurgitate should be very colorful (like the rampage alt when he`s charging) with -you guessed it - stars in it. Of course he does not vomit; he uses his wand.

His silence should be something like flicking his wand and crying out `Shush!` or `I speak now!`, again, in a clumsy, funny way.

His minions should be funny, like little bunnies or similar.

His ultimate could be a spectacular sparkling blast with -yep- colors and/or stars. He would cry out `ACHOO!` because of his clumsy concept again; he didn`t really want to blast everything to dust but he sneezed and flicked his wand accidentally.

[DrExten]

chef-Balpha tells it all. I would like you s2 to make this avatar to look like an original restaurant chef. with this means there will be rats running around across the world of newerth as the original minions.

Texture
Now quick onto the submission itself: As i've mantioned above, my avatar will be wearing, "White Chef hat", "grey T-shirt (spelling really HOT in black)", he will also wear a skirt in grey covered with squares of colors "black and white" and black shoes.

As weapons my avatar will be holding a butchers knife, and a canvas bagin color grey "spelling what it looks like (Plague) in color black".
As the model, the avatar it self will be a fat grown man between age 40-60.

The minions will be rats in colors grey, with pink tails.

Abilities concept
Q: will be in the same model as the original except for the flamming spit will be "vomit in color slime-green".
W: The same.
E: will summon grey rats with pink tail.
R: Will summon "fire flames" flashing out to the sides surrounding balphagore, (almost like Slithers ultimate).

Sound
Q: will have the sound of someone puking.
W: same
E: Balph will scream "Damn you naggers, get here!"
R: Balph will tell truth and pretty much scream it out from the tops of his lungs,"More cooks, the worse the soup!".

[twincitiez]

[Art from Diablo 3(Blizzard)]
Belphuriel - Archangel of Hope

Regurgitate > Light of Dawn
(Sends out holy light infront of Belphagore.)

Demonic Pathogen > Mind Sear

Corpse Conversion > Acts of Sacrifice
(Corpses gets ressurected as human soldiers.)

Hell on Newerth > Cord of Hope
(Trembles the ground and blasts out big waves of holy light and summons sacrifical angels.)

[[BBDS]Sebsebeleb]

Snotter Lord!

The poor snotters keep being killed over and over, with no one to protect them. They also happen to be the second cutest of all Newerth (Balpha #1 obviously).

The hero model should look like a quite (snotters are not rich, they're easy creeps for a reason) heavily armored, huge round snotter, wielding a large primitive poleaxe.

The Snotters and the other neutral creeps have long been oppressed, being exploited and robbed for their money, only to fund the war between the Hellbourne and Legion, and Snotter Lord has had enough! It is time to assemble the force of the nature, and strike back!


Skills

Q: The Snotter Lord throws up sticky snotter goo.

W: Being told you are fired from your job would render anyone silenced untill they get over the surprise! And when they're over it and tell their colleagues, they're sure to get jumped as well.

E: Snotter lord summons small armored snotters (The grey/black (or perhaps tribe/leather) armor seperate them from regular snotters) wielding spears dipped in poison, willingly borrowed from ebulas (Creep revolution! We will tolerate no more killing of the innocent!)

R: Seeing his enemies cast spells and killing his allies makes his boiling anarchism over, screaming so loud his enemies have to cover their ears, and, if he is sufficiently furious, snotters will emerge from nearby forests, attacking heroes.

[TheShawn]

• Avatar Name:
• Hell Demon Balphagore
• Design of Avatar:
• He will somewhat look like the devil himself (Bright red) with a ridiculously long tail (with a triangle point), possibly slightly chubby (if u know what i mean ^_-*)
• He will have an epic pitch fork that stays ablaze with fire
• His voice will be a Satanic Demon voice always weeping, deep but sad
• Voice Quotes:
• "Humans taste better anything else!"
• "Is it hot in here or is it me?"
• "Arise my little ones, ARISE!"
• "I'm out of mana, Let's use BLOOD!"
• "Great, who stole my pitch fork?"
• "Do you belong here? Let me check my list"
• "I consume corpses, not souls, muahahaha!"
• "Someone turn the air condition on, I can't take it anymore!"
• "Ooooooooooooooooh nooooooooooooooooooooo"
• "Fire? what fire!?"
• "I will bring everyone to Hell!"
• "What's for dinner? I'm HUNGRY!"
• "Who were you sent by?"
• Skill Design:

• **Regurgitate** will spit a better graphical version of fire changing colors from yellow to red to orange every other casts..
• **Demonic Pathogen** will set the target a blaze with a huge flame covering them and same as spread units, if spell spreads
• **Corpse Conversion** will raise small little baby devils with pitch forks or demons with pitch forks, while collecting corpses the ground will be set blazed of fire where the corpse was (obviously doing no damage, just visually appealing)
• **Hell on Newerth** will be similar to Diablo's flame circle in Diablo 2, as it ripples outward, the bigger the flames with the amount of stacks

[[SmiD]Morghulis]

Pregnant Women Balf

[[MAID]TAD]

I think since Balphagore is such a consumption oriented hero it is probably obvious an alt avatar with the theme of chef should come about sooner than later. So far there doesn't seem to be a Chef Avatar theme so here I am throwing it out there: Chef Gorardee. For those who are curious, it's a play off of Chef Boyardee our favorite ravioli chef extraordinaire! The whole theme would be around food items with regurgitation spurting them around and having possible food products in the fray of his other spells! Let me explain a little more of the basic premise for our newly named Chef Gorardee.

Regurgitate: Instead of spewing corpses have him throw up half eaten/dissolving food products like a drumstick with a bite taken out of it, noodles, whatever you can think of! It's a nasty spell by nature so it may as well have something gross coming out of it.

Demonic Pathogen: Well the first thing that comes to mind is some kind of sugar crash, but you can make it like Nausea where you get a dizzy headache like feel to it and you can represent that in some way like the corrupted brain icon (except green and all whacky or a face about to puke).

Corpse Conversion: The best potential for this is having little food monsters running around the field! You can make them like a vegetable army, or have little Raviolings running around ravaging your enemy! Again, there's so much food out there not even Chef Gorardee can handle it.

Hell on Newerth: The little guy that spawns I feel as though would be perfect as a Mystery Meat monster that of course explodes on death like all mystery meat. Going out on a limb, you could have the wave itself be Ketchup and then Mustard and what not spewing out of the ground/cracks and crevices that appear.

The possibilities are far and wide for Chef Gorardee, and I just wanted to lay out the idea for the rest of the community to have a look at and decide what to do with. Please feel free to respond and add new ideas for our nommy new creation and especially for spell names! (since I'm stumped when it comes to that).

[BLOODFALCON]

I posted a pizza-chef balphagore on the top of the second page. and now there are like 3 or 4+ other chef suggestions. how about you all get behind pizza chef balphagore instead of splitting up

[jemal]

A Drunken Balphagore! he could just throw up for regurgitate, and for minions he could have smaller drunken people, he could be carrying a big glass of beer on his chest where the fire normally is, for his silence he could splash some of his beer on the enemy, and for his ultimate, He drops the giant glass of beer for a big wave

[[CTFB]RedRobster]

Milkman Balphagore

Concept Art:


Appearance:

• Milkman outfit with hat
  
• Getting rid of the horns on either side of his body
• His left hand (one with blade) will be holding a milk crate
• Right hand will be holding a big bottle of milk instead of an axe
• Instead of his normal tail, it should be a cows tail

Abilities:

• Q - Regurgitate - Milk vomit. - Phrase: "Got milk?"
• W - Demonic Pasteurization - White beam
• E - Corpse Conversion - Instead of minions, zombie cows
• R - Milk on Newerth (?) - Wave of white milk; Minions will be zombie bulls with large horns

Attack Animation: Swings giant milk bottle; sort of like a club

Movement Animation: Same as before

Catch Phrases: (?)

• Taunt - "Your wife's been sleeping with the milkman"

Inspiration from:

[[WxOn]EvryTimeIDie]

I think we should get away from physical models, lets get some more unique models such as smoke possibly, and that leads me to my idea for a Toxic / Smoke style Balphagore. He could retain a bulky, but a clear vision that he is like a dark gray smoke. His voice could be real scratchy and possibly slightly slurred words (since if smoke were to take a form, it definately would not have the ability to speak clearly).

Exhaling Toxins (regurgitate) Activate to breathe the toxins from yourself, dealing magic damage and slowing movement speed.

Consuming Fission (corpse conversion) Passively allows you to consume corpses from the ground by feeding off the decay and toxins, increasing the size of smoke with each stack consumed, upon activating fission Balphagore returns to his default size and summons small replicas of himself.

Terrifying Smother (Demonic Pathogen) Smoke shoots out of you and smothers the target. Target an enemy to inflict silence and deal magic damage, when activated the smoke lets off a shriek and branches to other enemy units.

Pollution (Hell on newerth) upon activating Balphagore unleashes all of his toxins in an expanding burst around him.


I like it, maybe others will too!

[Eruka_Frog]

Here is my idea for a female version of him. "The Balphaqueen"


[Not my art]



The Spells can be the same.

Hero Sound:
"Uhhhh.., Mommy got some flesh for you!"
"Who is Mommys best boy?... NO, YOU´RE NOT!"
"Touch me, and i will touch you with my rolling pin!"
"Come and join the meal... you will be our special guest.." (dirty laugh)
"hold still, and stop crying! It will be over soon.."
"Here a corpse, there a corpse."

[Jonte18]

Make him a slime/sludge monster... spawning mini slimeballs(fighters) and ulti: a big BOOM slime splash spawning medium slimefighters



EDIT: Saw a earlier post with the same idea, Well great minds think alike.

[Iceburns]

Balphaqueen sounds awesome.

[[BdM]Tarreil]

Steampunk Balphagore

Regurgitate > Chop Shop

(Spits out Cogs and other mechanical parts.)

Demonic Pathogen > Rust

(Spits out a rusty looking fluid)

Corpse Conversion > Living Production
(Corpses/cogs are turned into Wind up Knights)

Hell on Newerth > System Overload/ Mass Production
(The ground erupts with a electrical discharge summoning larger Wind up Knights.)


All Artwork shown is not owned by me, the following artist are credited: zeo-x, obyekt, napalmdruid, and Robotinvader (company).

[[ZOMG]SpikeBolt]

My suggestion is Brophelia

[Cyferion]

Balphagolem:

Made out of Coal/Black rocks and Lava, a thick daemonic Golem with 4 glowing eyes and 2 horns.
A bloated mid-section to resemble Balphagore.
Animated lava flowing throughout the cracks of his body, some lava dropping to the ground.
Slightly triangular back to resemble the tip of a volcano.
A small volcano crater on the back and mid-section
General color of this hero is dominant Black and minor Red and Yellow (lava)
Will not resemble Magmus as Magmus is dominant Red with yellow.
Will resemble Balphagore with his stomach and fierfy visual effects.

(S2 please help out with the story -_-)
The Hellbourne warlocks sacrificed plenty of human flesh to an ancient volcano, they then casted daemonic summoning spells, the volcano crumbled, and the earth shook as it started to move, to rise, a gigantic golem came to life, made of rocks, coal and lava, Balphagolem has attained a taste for flesh, and thus abides the Hellbourne. (you get the point, flesh loving vocano golem)

Golemish deep slow voice, he's an Ancient that has been around since early newerth, a violent volcano.

"I'll grill you to the bone"
"Time for some Barbeque"
"Hmmm.. Burnt flesh.."
"I feed on fear.. and flesh"
"I miss being a Volcano, they used to feed me humans daily"
"I tend to explode at times"
"I was once a mighty Volcano"
"Extinction awaits"
"Their blood will boil in my presence"
"The shockwave will cook them"



Q: spews lava and burnt corpses add a bit of smoke
W: Stays same
E: Summons small golem minions (similar look as him, other shape)
R: Cataclysmic volcanic explosion, the volcano on his back explodes mightily.
A bit of smoke from his crater afterwards.

[preteengirl]

Balphaqueen, god yes.