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Voice and Quotes
I hope everyone likes it. I thought it was a rather entertaining idea, and it goes well with the dumpster taunt.
Nice artwork man... really... but I think you have run out of fantasy. Take a look at my work on page 16 ... yours seems familiar ^^
Lots of people had the idea of walking with his hands, including me XD
Balphagore Thunder's Rider
he got a metallic skin, smaller then the current balph and got a wand in his right hand, ridding an type of creature like a chimera.
-> First Skill : Thunder Breath
the chimera blasts eletricity doing the similar effect to balphagore
-> Second Skill : Magic Shot
has similar to demonic pathogen but he uses his magical wand and shoot an eletrical projectile.
-> Third Skill : Chimera's Factory
has similar effect to corpse conversion but instead of summoning demons he creates chimeras and they look like hounds.
->Forth Skill: Destruction of Newerth : the chimera releases all the concentrated energy in the form of an eletric explosion , spawning some eletric elementals that attacks nearby enemies
Deep under Newerth within the murky depths, the Goblins worked feverishly. Whips cracking at their backs, they fastened metal plates and bolts to the mechanical monstrosity before them. Their masters, clothed in darkness, had seen the Daemon Balphagore and the havoc he wreaked. Forging their own creation in his image, they too would join the Hellbourne in ravaging Newerth. Another whip cracked. But this time, the screams of the Goblins were drowned out by the screeching and whizzing of metal and flesh.
A dark cloud began to form in the distance as the sound of a thousand dying souls rose up over the ruins. The goblin-made ‘BioSteel Balphagore’ screeched along, sucking up corpses with its metal arm, chewing them instantly by countless spinning blades. It swivels around on its monstrous, metal-spiked wheel. Floating in a large dome atop the metal hell, one of the many floating eyes catches sight of something. Simultaneously, a bit of brain mass floats up and presses itself on the cloudy glass as the wheel turns in the direction. The screeching of the wheel and the shrieking vacuum filling ears with fear as it moves...
See art for Hero.
Spell 1 - Choking Smog (Regurgitate)
The smoke emitting from the pipes protruding from BioSteel Balphagore (gaseous remnants of fuel consumption, mobility and minion creation) are aimed to choke and stifle his enemies. Graphic: Could be like Demented Shaman’s Storm Cloud but much more concentrated and dark green/black.
Spell 2 - Infectious Ooze (Demonic Pathogen)
A wave of infectious, black ooze (the primary toxin that fuels and maintains himself and his minions) is spat from his cannon-saw arm at an opponent. Graphic: could resemble Pyromancer’s Blazing Strike but dark green/black and clay-like/ooze-like effects. Once they’re hit, they turn a dark, thick green color and leave behind droplets of dark slime (as they’re silenced and taking damage).
Spell 3 - Vacuum Transmutagen (Corpse Conversion)
Nearby corpses are sucked up with his metal, blade-filled vacuuming arm, shredding them instantly and recombining them to construct his minions. Minions are combined in the ooze-leaking tank on his back. Imagine small biotic creatures - their heads are wads of eyeballs and they have large, oozing stomachs - brains and intestines hanging out in small bits - their bodies suspended by walking metal spikes. See art for Minions.
Spell 4 - Consumption Expulsion (Hell on Newerth)
After absorbing the energy spent from nearby heroes and channeling a dark power within - the two enormous, green-pulsing fuses protruding from BioSteel Balph’s stomach suddenly flare up and explode - erupting in a giant electric wave of green light. Graphic: Imagine Electrician’s shield combined with Chrono’s Chronofield that emanates like the original Balphagore’s Hell on Newerth.
Sounds would involve screeching metal noises, metal grinding, spinning metal (like a food processor or blender), bubbling noises, noises going through pipes, ooze escaping through tight spaces, ooze on metal/being chewed by metal, thick smacks (like someone throwing mud on mud) type noises. The pulsing from the fuses, the grinding of the wheel and the smoking from the pipes would remain constant as they’re common, second-to-second sounds.
Artwork is original.
-> First Skill : Regurgitate : vomits a Poisonous smog from Mad prof.Balph mouth
-> Second Skill : Daemonic Pathogen : from the power of hellbourne mad prof.balph can infect and silence them with the beam that came from the eye
-> Third Skill : Corpse Conversion : Mad prof.balph can turn the corpse into a poisonous smog minion that aid mad prof.balph in battle Hell on newerth
->Forth Skill: : Hell on newerth : Mad Prof.balph press a button from it's hand for activating the tube in his back for pumping it and blast with a poisonous smog
Mad Prof.Balph Sound : Well make it like a diseased person sound
I didn't read any of the pages other than the first 2. So if there's any resemblance to other ideas, it's merely coincidence.