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Hell yeah!
Noes, but I tell why!
PLEASE READ THE SPELLS THOUROUGHLY BEFORE COMMENTING, THANK YOU. AND ANOTHER LITTLE NOTE: English isn't my native language. So sorry if there are spelling/grammar errors.
Image is like said above just presenting, but she shouln't look exactly like that. She should have a white kimono and a white blindfold. And the boots should be fully removed (bare foots)
17+2 | 13+1.2 | 27+2.2
Movement Speed: 305
Attack Range: 500
Damage: 49 - 55
Armor: 2.9
Attack Animation: 0.35 / 0.65
Cast Animation: 0.53 / 0.5
Base Attack Time: 1.7
Missile Speed: 900
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The tradition of the Kuchiki-Clan was to blind the eyes of their princess after their birth to prevent, that they get distracted from their objective to destroy everything that is good and in harmony. Even with blind eyes she was able to master the art of Reiki, the banishing of spiritual energy in signs onto scrolls and allowed her to get insight of the spiritual world of the living and nature. She realized the madness from her own clan and that they get controled by the forces of the Hellbourne. Now she fleed from her home and joined the Legion for only one objective: Destroy the Hellbourne for receiving true freedom for herself and her Clan.
Role:
Pusher/Ganker
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Attack animation:
Kenchicki throwing a scroll in the air, where slowly a glowing (ghost) dagger with a Reiki as a tail is shooting out.
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Move animation:
Like a ninja shes running with an obviated body.
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Death animation:
She's falling on her knees screaming and loosing tons of scrolls in every direction.
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Voice:
moving around-
"I'm seing more than you..."
"The spirits may aid me"
"I'm blind? For that I'm seeing clearly"
"I love the harmony..."
attacking-
"For freedom!"
"Here is a letter for you..."
"Where is the end?"
"I will hit them!"
Dying-
"Aaaargh >.<"
Misc-
"The spirits of the living are so... living"
"Did you see that spirit? Hah, I did!"
"I wonder where all the paper is coming from..."
"Oh no, where is my brush? I can't see it!"
Scroll of Soul Burn
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Casting Range: 550
Debuff Area of Effect: 250
Avaible Targets: Single Enemy Units
Damage Type: True
Casting Type: Unit
[1] Dealing 75 damage, target receive 10 charges of "Shattered Soul" and units around the target 5 charges.
[2] Dealing 150 damage, target receive 15 charges of "Shattered Soul" and units around the target 8 charges.
[3] Dealing 225 damage, target receive 20 charges of "Shattered Soul" and units around the target 11 charges.
[4] Dealing 300 damage, target receive 25 charges of "Shattered Soul" and units around the target 14 charges.
Manacost: 95 / 120 / 145 / 170
Cooldown: 14 seconds
Damaged Soul Effect:Slows the target by X%, where X is the number of charges. One charge is lost every 0.3 secound. Re-casting doesn't reset the counter, they are added of the remaining instead.
[Visual] Kenchicki throwing a scroll in front of her and facing the target, which freezing in this position. The same time a white orb gets spawned on the enemy target. In the time the scroll is burning down (after the 0,3 secs) the orb explode with a white circle beam. The debuff takes place after the explosion, the damage impact goes instant after the cast.
[Synergy] Ultimate gank spell. Together with his 2nd spell a good nuke combo. With his ultimate he can recast it fast, and re-slow it with more slow. So his 3rd spell is easier to aim.
[Balance] Basic idea is same like in DotA. But instead of giving a chance to miss (no synergy at all) it slows with synergie to all with his 3 spells. For that the damage is decreased each level.
[Changes from Laser] Instead of a useless miss chance he get a slow, which synergises perfect to your other spells.__________________________________________________
Scroll of Haunting
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Casting Range: 1500
Avaible Targets: Nearest Enemy Hero(es) (even in fog!)
Damage Type: Magic
Casting Type: Instant
[1] After impact the projectile dealing 100 damage to the nearest enemy hero.
[2] After impact the projectile dealing 175 damage to the nearest enemy hero.
[3] After impact the projectiles dealing 250 damage each to the nearest 2 enemy heroes.
[4] After impact the projectiles dealing 325 damage each to the nearest 2 enemy heroes.
Manacost: 120 / 140 / 160 / 180
Cooldown: 25 seconds
[Visual] Kenchicki one/two scroll/s in the air, which freezing in this position. A white arrow is slowly coming out of the scroll and flying to the target with EXPOTENTAIL speed. That means, first the projectile is coming out with around 100 ms, and slowly gets speed after a time.
[Synergy] Another perfect gank spell. Together with his 1nd spell a good nuke combo like said above. With his ultimate he can recast it fast, and the expotential speed is the key in his synergy. With refreshing this spell he can recast it in the time where the projectile is still in the air, and giving more time for a suprising attack.
[Balance] Basicly the same spell like in DotA. But like said the projectile have expotential speed. Additionaly he can hit units in fog, for that the range is decreased by 1000.
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- Range decreased by 1000
- Hits units in fog
- Projectile flying with expotential speed
Scroll of 1000 Daggers
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Casting Range: 300
Spawn AoE: 700
Impact AoE: 50
Explosion AoE: 150
Avaible Targets: Enemy Units
Projectile: Mass little uncontrolable random-spawned projectiles
Casting Type: Vector Target
Damage Type: Superior Magic
[1] After a projectile impact, it explodes with 5-20 damage, depending on the distance of the projectile.
[2] After a projectile impact, it explodes with 10-30 damage, depending on the distance of the projectile.
[3] After a projectile impact, it explodes with 15-40 damage, depending on the distance of the projectile.
[4] After a projectile impact, it explodes with 20-50 damage, depending on the distance of the projectile.
Manacost: 145/ 150 / 165 / 190
Cooldown: 35 seconds
[Visual] Kenchicki make a spin and puting a long scroll to her back, which freezing in this position. Randomly white arrow is slowly coming out of the scroll and flying to the target with EXPOTENTAIL speed. That means, first the projectile is coming out with around 100 ms, and slowly gets speed after a time. They fly in a line, and explode with a little bomb-like explosion on impact.
[Synergy] His AoE Spell. Together with his slow a good damage dealing spell. Basicly the same spell like in DotA (March of the Machines) but with a tweak.
[Balance] Basicly the same spell like in DotA. But like said the projectile have expotential speed.
[Changes from March of the Machines]
- Expotential speed
- Range = amount of damage
- Vector targeting
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Harmony Brushing
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Casting Type: Channeling
[1] After 3 secounds channeling time it refreshing all cooldowns of her abilities and item cooldowns.
[2] After 2 secounds channeling time it refreshing all cooldowns of her abilities and item cooldowns.
[3] After 1 secound channeling time it refreshing all cooldowns of her abilities and item cooldowns.
(Item exceptions: Shrunken Head, Ring of Sorcery, Alchemist Bones, Whispering Helm, Puzzlebox)
Manacost: 150 / 250 / 350
Cooldown: 0 seconds
[Visual] Kenchicki sits down,have some green spirits glying around here, and she is brushing some scrolls with reiki-symbols.
[Synergy] Her unique ultimate spell. This spell is 1:1 from Tinker. There is no need to change it.
[Balance] Well, basicly the Keiki-Ronin have the same concept like Tinker, with some tweaks to make her spells with more synergy and unique ideas. This ability making Tinker so matchless.
[Changes from Rearm]
- No changes at all
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QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS
[Q] Question: Is this Character an Anime character?
[A] Answer: NO! She should represent a serious japan-character like from a legend.
ALL FEEDBACK IS WELCOME!
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Last edited by AtroCty; 02-22-2011 at 02:01 PM. Reason: Updating for Good reason
For a second I thought the word porn in your post was a link. Got me all excited....
Anyways, I know since your third skill is slightly different then march that it's not a 1-1 port technically, but I don't think it's different enough to be considered not a 1-1 port yet.
THIS SIGNATURE WILL HELP ME FIND MY LITTLE PONIES FASTER AS I SCROLL SEARCHING FOR MY LITTLE PONIES.
Too many strange words. I get stuck at each and every one of them.
I hope you're joking about the cooldown on that ultimate. Zero seconds? The excluded items doesn't include Restoration Stone, essentially meaning all items and abilities wouldn't have a cooldown (with the exceptions already mentioned), so long as one has the mana for it.
I have no clue what you're talking about with the third skill. Is it making auto-attack hit everything between the hero and its target within the radius? Is it supposed to make the attack explode on impact, dealing damage to everything near the target?
The first and second skills are acceptable, though.
I love tinker and I like the concept... no so into anime in HoN but it's good overall.
http://www.playdota.com/heroes/tinker
Yea 0 seconds. Also most of the skills are same as Tinker from DoTA, so i posted a link for you to see that its not unbalanced. It cost 350 mana and 1 sec channeling to pull it off (at level 16,double the mana cost of refreshing stone if i am not mistaken). So spamming all 3 skills + ulti ( without getting stunned) will leave him pretty much dry in early/mid part of the game.
Also vote for concept not numbers, cause numbers can be easily changed.
Well, it wasn't supposed to be a manga like character (like Pandamonium... lol attack/cast animations and sounds).
She'd rather being a serious japanese "legendary" warior (Look switfblade - a manga char? ) With her crucial blindness she should look more "serious" . The picture/voice example video are just representing, because much manga's handling with this kind of characters. (And I didn't found better ones ^^ )
Well, you never played DotA before, right? If you do, you would see that isnt that imba you calling him out. You allready said it right: As long he has mana, he is imba. Did you seen the high manacost of EVERY spell even in low levels? You will have problems to use them all. And his low HP makes him to a gank victim.Originally Posted by Beroya![]()
I hope you're joking about the cooldown on that ultimate. Zero seconds? The excluded items doesn't include Restoration Stone, essentially meaning all items and abilities wouldn't have a cooldown (with the exceptions already mentioned), so long as one has the mana for it.
I have no clue what you're talking about with the third skill. Is it making auto-attack hit everything between the hero and its target within the radius? Is it supposed to make the attack explode on impact, dealing damage to everything near the target?
The first and second skills are acceptable, though.
Oh, and if you want see him in action:
Boush, the Tinker
Watch his third skill in action, you you may know how it should work.
this is such a great suggestion, i hope the developers at S2 dont turn a blind eye to this, i hope they can see the sheer brilliance in your idea.
Heads Up Atrocty, great job. Finally i can get my favorite hero into HoN
cant wait to see it ingame![]()
I hate this random T-Downers. Why it isn't possible to see who voted for it?