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  1. #1

    Vanderjack

    Been tinkering with a str hero I like to call Vanderjack on and off for a while now and before I published on dream I wanted peoples opinions. He can be found on dream >>here<<

    I have no art as of yet but since that can be edited in later and I am not an artist it will just have to wait.

    Hero Backstory:
    Vanderjack was born during the war between beast and man in Caldavar. Raised by his father after his mother was killed by a duo of Stalkers, he became trained in the art of war. His father was one of the fabled Shield bearers and taught his son everything he knew about fighting. Being both young and frustrated by his mothers death, Vanderjack had no patience for the traditional axe and shield tactics of his father.

    One of his fathers many vices was gambling. In their village few gambled so never led to much until the day Blacksmith wandered into the village wounded and near death. While nothing was ever waged, the rolling of dice kept the Blacksmiths mind alive and provided entertainment for the bot and father. The fathered rolled dice and the boy sat captivated by the Blacksmiths stories of battle.

    In attempts to emulate his new found idols weapon style, the boy gave up using a shield in favor of dual axes. Switching was difficult and his father often caught him fumbling with the axes. In order for the boy to become more fluent with dual wielding his father fashioned him two wooden clubs. The boy fell in love with his new weapons instantly and his prowess began to show.

    The boys recovery from his mothers death looked promising until the night that a fellow Shield Bearer came with the news of the fathers death. That was the last night anyone saw the boy. He walked into the night with his crude clubs without a glance back. The forests whispered about the revenge he sought and his rising kill count attested to his devotion. All through this time not a living soul saw the boy and lived to tell of it. That was until the coming of the Hellbourne. He has returned wielding two powerful morning stars, Dusk and Dawn. It is unclear where he went and where the weapons were obtained but Vanderjack knows how to use them. The beastmen may have destroyed his family but Sol be damned if the Hellbourne destroy his world.


    Ability 1 Notes: Illumination

    On attack 10% / 15% / 20% / 25% chance to slow target for 5% / 10% / 15% / 20% for 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 seconds.

    With the use of Dusk Till Dawn, Illumination gains the chance to lower targets armor.

    Cooldown: 2.0 Seconds.

    This ability contains an Attack Modifier. Attack modifiers are exclusive and do not stack with other attack


    Ability 2 Notes: Pitch Black


    On Attack
    10% / 15% / 20% / 25% chance to deal 40% / 50% / 60% / 70 bonus Magic damage to target.

    With the use of Dusk Till Dawn, Pitch Black gains the chance to stun the target.

    Cooldown: 2.0 Seconds.

    This This ability contains Bashing properties. Items and abilities with Bashing properties contain a shared cooldown time.


    Ability 3 Notes: Dashing Defense

    Vanderjack rolls 600 / 650 / 700 / 800 units to target position. Upon completion applies Dashing Defense to self for 10 seconds.

    Dashing Defense
    Armor increased by 3 / 6 / 9 / 12.
    Movement speed increased by 4% / 8% / 12% / 16%

    Activation: [E]
    Cast time: .5 Seconds
    Mana Cost: 50 / 60 / 70 / 80
    Cooldown: 20 / 16 / 12 / 8 seconds.


    Ability 4 Notes: Dusk til Dawn

    On use, for 10 / 20 / 30 seconds, grants Illumination the chance to lower targets armor upon attack by 1 / 3 / 5 and Pitch Black the chance to stun target upon attacks for .5 / 1 / 1.5 seconds.

    Activation: [R]
    Cast time: .5 Seconds
    Mana Cost: 100 / 200 / 300
    Cooldown: 30 / 60 / 90 seconds

  2. #2
    While i like the general idea of the character, I think you may want to pseudo random his abilities. Because otherwise he would suffer the same as any other character based on procs... sometimes he will be crazy overpowered, and sometimes he will be absolutely worthless.

    I also think he'll be a somewhat boring character to play.. he'd basically just be a ricer until his attack speed and survivability would be acceptable enough to make him worth something in a team fight.
    They told me he was only going to sleep... oh how they lied.


    Sweetie - a support character design by ME!

  3. #3
    Perhaps put the procs on cool downs similar to chronos and krakens abilities rather than just a straight up %?

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