Saiphen - AGI Hard Carry

[[Zong]Nenquel]

Here's an new hero for you! I am waiting for your feedback!
If you have constructive ideas how to improve this hero, feel free to share them!


Saiphen's Hon Dream Page:
http://dream.heroesofnewerth.com/hero/Nenquel/Saiphen

** Some Information on the hero (mostly added as responses to new comments):
- The Ultimate is supposed to be hard to keep up on low levels. It should be able to keep it up for maybe 4/11/25 seconds at levels 6/11/16... something like that.

[[TGCH]DemoniWaari]

Kinda weird to have agility carry which needs immense amounts of manaregen to keep that ultimate up for even 10 seconds. And I do think that the invisibility reveal is pretty bad skill overall. However I think that with a little tweak this has potential to become a new type of a INT carry.

[[Zong]Nenquel]

And I do think that the invisibility reveal is pretty bad skill overall.

You're right, but I couldn't think of something useful.. yet, cause here's the new idea for the first skill:
Black Feathers: Increases movement speed by 30% and 100% to block 30 damage for 4/6/8/10 seconds.
It's basically just some skill to get away from a fight, or hunt someone down.
This will be most probably changed with a new version, as soon as I got more feedback!

** EDIT:
The new skill (Black feathers) has just been updated! I hope you like it!

[[MixC]Dayew]

There are several flaws that I see with this hero, and I'll point out some for you.
First of all, a hard carry is not supposed to have a stun. A long duration (2.5 seconds) stun on a short cooldown (8 seconds) is very hard to balance, for it is a sure winner in carry versus carry fights.
Second thing which bothers me is pretty boring gameplay. Hon has already many carries basically with strong passives and right click. (Predator and Sand Wraith come to mind.)
Also, if possible, try to avoid designing skills that include luck as a large factor; 3rd skill's silence chance of 15% is so low that you can get nuked down and it doesn't proc once. My advice is to get some charge-based system if you really want to have your attackers silenced, or raise the chance and nerf some other aspects.
Don't get me wrong, I like the hero in concept. I just think the skills could be a bit better. I like the idea of ulti though, sacrificing mana for Maliken-like ultimate sounds interesting.

[[Zong]Nenquel]

@Dayew: Thank you alot, I completely understand your thoughts and I appreciate you sharing them!
Indeed you're right, about the stun ability for hard carrys. I will also consider tweaking the silence ability.
And thanks for the compliment on the ult, cause that's kind of the idea I wanted to base the hero on. =D

I will rework this hero, and present a new version soon!