Sirrush (STR Ganker/Semi Carry)

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Sirrush
The half dragon

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STORY

Once a feared human slaughter who was known to kill anyone for his own
pleasure, Sirrush got caught by the ancient dragons. They bound him to
serve them as messenger amongst the humans, elves, dwarves, and some
other creatures and gave him the ancient Dragonsword and an armor to
protect him against all harms. It was to late when he realized that it was
an magic armor, which changed not just his outfit - no, it changed his
whole being as formerly human. It turned his body into the armor itself...
After the transformation was over, he couldnt believe that he looks like an
anthro dragon and tried to reverse it. But the new bound pact to the dragons
inhibited him to get rid of his new biologic armor. Now featured with some
new bestial behaviours and abilities he is known as the "Harbinger of Death"
who sends a deadly message to anyone who deceives the Ancients.
Just like the Hellbourne does...

STATS

Attack Range: melee (120)
Armor: 5.0
Base Attack Time: 1.6
Damage: 50-61
Move Speed: 295
Mainattribute: Strength
STR: 26 (3.0 per level)|AGI: 15 (1.4 per level)|INT: 12 (1.6 per level)
Affiliate: Legion

VISUAL/APPEARANCE

Normal:

• On attack he swings his ancient Dragonsword with much power onto his enemy.
  

• OUTDATED PICTURE
  

While his Ultimate is active he looks a bit altered:

• He gets a muzzle and a long tail
• His body size is increased (ca. a half bodysize bigger than normal)
• has bigger and DEADLY claws
• He scratches his opponents with his claws now
• Sword disappeares
• bigger muscles

SOUNDS

• A deep and dark voice.
• While PATH OF THE DRAGON lasts he is more grunting and yelling than speaking.

Move:
"As you wish..."
"Delivering..."

Attack:
"Ah, my next costumer..." *hahahaha...*
"The Message will be delivered..."
"My client does not like you!"

Select:
"What's your command, Master?"

Ultimate:
"This will end painful..."

Dead:
"I will come back..."
"It's still not delivered..."

I admit the sounds lacks a bit in creativity, but if you have some better ideas, i would like to hear them.

ABILITIES

ACID BREATH - 1st Ability

Due to his half transformed body he is able to vomit an acid smoke which erodes enemy armor and limits their movementspeed.

Just slow down...

Description:

• Sirrush vomits an acid smoke for 4 seconds into the direction he faces (He is still able to move).
• It affects an area in a 30 degree cone.
• If an enemy is hit it gains the MELTING! buff.
• If an enemy is hit the whole 4 seconds, a bonus armor and movement reduce will be added to the existing MELTING! buff.

Cooldown: 15 seconds
Range: 400
AOE: N/A
Casting range: N/A
Duration: 4 seconds
Ability Type: active
Damage-Type: N/A
Targeting Type: self
Manacosts: 70 / 90 / 110 / 130

MELTING!

• An enemy gains one charge per second he is affected by ACID BREATH (a maximum of 4 charges).
• After the enemy gets out of the aoe of ACID BREATH, MELTING! lasts furthermore as long as the charges reaches zero (each charge lasts 1 second).
• The number of the current charges multiplies the armor and movement reduction as well as it multiplies the damageamount of the burning dps.
• If an enemy has 3 charges it will reduce ( with Lvl.2 of ACID BREATH) 3*1,0=3 armor and 3*0,5%=1,5% movementspeed the first second, 2*1,0=2 armor and 2*0,5%=1,0% movementspeed the second second and 1*1,0=1 armor and 1*0,5%=0,5% movementspeed the third/last second.
• The bonus of the complete 4 charges will stay the whole Time the Buff MELTING! exists on an enemy.
  

Visual/Mechanic:

Sirrush vomits a dark green, more greylike smoke into the direction he faces which begins to fade out after a range of 400.
Affected enemies gets a slight dark grey armor.

Leveling:

Lvl.1: -0,5 Armor (-1 Armor Bonus) | 0,5% movement reduction (2,0% movement reduction Bonus)
Lvl.2: -1,0 Armor (-2 Armor Bonus) | 1,0% movement reduction (4,0% movement reduction Bonus)
Lvl.3: -1,5 Armor (-3 Armor Bonus) | 1,5% movement reduction (6,0% movement reduction Bonus)
Lvl.4: -2,0 Armor (-4 Armor Bonus) | 2,0% movement reduction
(8,0% movement reduction Bonus)

BRUTE ARMOR- 2nd Ability

His new Body contains an enhanced Armor which has been never seen before - protecting his Body and giving him the strength of a halfdragon. With this power he is able to knock anyone away who dares to surround him.

Come closer...

Description:

• BRUTE ARMOR increases the Armor and healthregeneration of Sirrush and allows to push enemies who stand around him away and dealing a short stun.

Cooldown: 10 / 11 / 12 / 13 seconds
Range: N/A
AOE: 200
Casting range: N/A
Duration: N/A
Ability Type: passive / active
Damage-Type: physical
Targeting Type: none (direct activation)
Manacosts: 75 / 95 / 115 / 125

Visual/Mechanic:

With a loud Yell, Sirrush reaches fast out towards his enemies and knocks them away. After they reached the end of knockback range

Leveling:

Lvl.1: +1 Armor | +1 healthregeneration | dealing 50 damage | pushing 100 units away | 0,5 seconds stun
Lvl.2: +3 Armor | +2 healthregeneration | dealing 100 damage | pushing 150 units away | 1,0 seconds stun
Lvl.3: +5 Armor | +3 healthregeneration | dealing 150 damage | pushing 200 units away | 1,5 seconds stun
Lvl.4: +7 Armor | +4 healthregeneration | dealing 200 damage | pushing 250 units away | 2,0 seconds stun

RAGE - 3rd Ability

Caused by the bestial side of Sirrush's nature he falls into a deep RAGE everytime he strikes an enemy, which impacts him to attack faster. The ancient Dragonsword gains this RAGE and can release it as a devastating additional magic damage.

Feeeel my hatred... *grunt*

Description:

• Sirrush has a maximum of 20 chages
• each strike on an enemy will increase it by 1 charge
• each 3 seconds passed without hitting an enemy unit will decrease it by 2 charges

Cooldown: N/A
Range: N/A
AOE: N/A
Casting range: N/A
Duration: permanent
Ability Type: passive / additional magic damage is toggleable
Damage-Type: magic-damage
Targeting Type: normal attacking
Manacosts: 6 / 9 / 12 / 15

Visual/Mechanic:

On gaining charges his eyes becomes more and more a red glow. If the magic damage of RAGE is activated, his sword begins to glow brighter the more charges he gained.

Leveling:

each charge gives
Lvl.1: +1 attackspeed | additional magic damage (0,5% of his charges) for 5 mana each attack
Lvl.2: +2 attackspeed | additional magic damage (1,0% of his charges) for 7 mana each attack
Lvl.3: +3 attackspeed | additional magic damage (1,5% of his charges) for 9 mana each attack
Lvl.4: +4 attackspeed | additional magic damage (2,0% of his charges) for 11 mana each attack

If he got 20 charges (Lvl.4) he get (20*4)=80 attackspeed and additional (20*2,0%)=40% magic damage based on his current strength

Sinergy:

RAGE will be improved by Path of the Dragon

PATH OF THE DRAGON - Ultimate

He absorbs his sword to gain it?s power to break through the rest of his human barrier and become a complete feral beasty dragon.

Don't fear me... Just die! *GRROOAR!*

Description

• Set the chargeamount of RAGE to maximum (only if RAGE is skilled).
• Improves RAGE by activation with increased movementspeed (only if RAGE is skilled)

Cooldown: 85/75/65 seconds
Range: N/A
AOE: N/A
Casting range: N/A
Duration: 8/10/12 seconds
Ability Type: active
Damage-Type: N/A
Targeting Type: none (direct)
Manacosts: 100 / 125 / 150 / 175

Gains DUAL CLAW ATTACK ability:

Altered into a big perfect anthro dragon, he is able to use both of his deadly and edged grown claws to attack.
ANY ATTACKMODIFIER ETC. WORKS ON THAT 2ND ATTACK

Replaces ACID BREATH with BURNING BREATH:

BURNING BREATH - 1st Ability

Due to his now fully transformed dragon body, Sirrush is able to ignite his ACID BREATH and dealing firedamage.

Burrrrrn!

Description:

• Sirrush vomits an ignited acid smoke for 4 seconds into the direction he faces (He is still able to move).
• It affects an area in a 60 degree cone.
• If an enemy is hit it gains the BURNING! buff.
• Due to the ignition of the acid smoke the effect of the movement and armor reduction is lowered.
• It has the same level as ACID BREATH
• If an enemy is hit the whole 4 seconds, a bonus armor and movement reduce will be added to the existing BURNING! buff.

Cooldown: 15 seconds
Range: 400
AOE: N/A
Casting range: N/A
Duration: 4 seconds
Ability Type: active
Damage-Type: Magic Damage
Targeting Type: self
Manacosts: 75 / 100 / 125 / 150

BURNING!

• An enemy gains one charge per second he is affected by the burning breath (a maximum of 4 charges).
• After the enemy gets out of the aoe of BURNING BREATH, BURNING! lasts furthermore as long as the charges reaches zero (each charge lasts 1 second).
• The number of the current charges multiplies the armor and movement reduction as well as it multiplies the damageamount of the burning dps.
• If an enemy has 3 charges it will deal ( with Lvl.2 of ACID BREATH) 3*30=90 magic damage the first second, 2*30=60 magic damage the second second and 1*30=30 magic damage the third/last second.
• The bonus of the complete 4 charges will stay the whole Time the Buff BURNING! exists on an enemy.

Visual/Mechanic:

The first ability ACID BREATH will be replaced by BURNING BREATH.
BURNING BREATH will emmit a burning flame out of Sirrush muzzle into the direction he faces and create some darkgreen/darkgrey smokes after the maximum range of 400.
Affected enemies gets an burning armor effect.

Leveling:

Lvl.1: -0,25 Armor (-1,0 Armor Bonus) | -0,25% movement-reduction (-2,0% movement speed reduction bonus) | 20 damage per second
Lvl.2: -0,50 Armor (-1,0 Armor Bonus) | -0,50% movement-reduction (-4,0% movement speed reduction bonus) | 20 damage per second
Lvl.3: -0,75 Armor (-1,0 Armor Bonus) | -0,75% movement-reduction (-6,0% movement speed reduction bonus) | 20 damage per second
Lvl.4: -1,00 Armor (-1,0 Armor Bonus) | -1,00% movement-reduction (-8,0% movement speed reduction bonus) | 20 damage per second

Visual/Mechanic:

With a loud yelling scream he turns into a dragon.
His body size is increases (ca. a half bodysize bigger than normal) and he gets a muzzle and a long tail.
The ancient Dragonsword disappeares with a bright green glow.
He also gets much bigger and DEADLY claws.

On DUAL CLAW ATTACK He just hit his opponent twice.

Leveling:

Lvl.1: 1 movementspeed each charge on RAGE | 15% chance of DUAL CLAW ATTACK
Lvl.2: 2 movementspeed each charge on RAGE | 30% chance of DUAL CLAW ATTACK
Lvl.3: 3 movementspeed each charge on RAGE | 45% chance of DUAL CLAW ATTACK

- UNDER CONSTRUCTION -

Well pictures and numbers are just a pre idea:
Any idea for changing the Spells or the numbers etc. is welcome

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Changelog:

15.05.2010:

• first introduction of Sirrush

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I will include it to the dream platform too

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Made some designchanges

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Did some balance changes

[Flupke]

Sounds like a pretty nice hero to me, ultimate might be abit complicated though :P imagine putting that into a tooltip ^^. Good sync between skills.

PS: thanks for ur comment on my hero

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bumped

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This is a modified version of Dragon Knight, Davion, from Dota. Its like all the same, just swapped skills here and there. 1st ability=fire breath, 2nd= stun, 3rd= hp regen, 4th=transforms into a dragon and gains certain attributes/abilities.

Imo, if it is for a hero to get into HoN, that would be a direct port from Dota with Davion. So, i would advise you to change ur hero's abilities completely and get something more creative in

[[MNI]EpicDream]

This is a modified version of Dragon Knight, Davion, from Dota. Its like all the same, just swapped skills here and there. 1st ability=fire breath, 2nd= stun, 3rd= hp regen, 4th=transforms into a dragon and gains certain attributes/abilities.

Imo, if it is for a hero to get into HoN, that would be a direct port from Dota with Davion. So, i would advise you to change ur hero's abilities completely and get something more creative in

Well I think only the 2nd skill is close to davions, but the stuneffect is different... I would prefer if you read my description in whole again, it seems you just only read the names and the short description...