PwnTroll
03-12-2010, 08:59 AM
So, this mostly started out as an idea not ment for anything special. But when my buddies pointed out this competition, and kind of dared me to submit it, I decided to go for it.
http://jacklightfoot.files.wordpress.com/2008/10/samurai-zombie-assassin-smallflat.jpg
Desciption:
Before the great war, a wicked fighter known then by the name of Saito-Mundi, challenged a mysterious warrior, wearing an ancient armor, to a battle beyond comprehension.
After a brutal defeat, Saito-Mundi was approached by a demon. Being only limbs on the ground, he was offered life and powers beyond imagination. Driven by his thirst for revenge, he made the pact with the demon, only to witness his own soul being devoured by the foul beast.
Now, consumed by his lust for blood, the possesed Ronin has long forgotten his name and his true human nature, and now wonders New Earth, restlessly looking for revenge.
(In my opinion, the hero should have sort of a zombie/samurai look to him. His walking animation shouldn't be too smooth either. He carries 1 or 2 swords sheathed, drawing them quickly out as he attacks and seathing them back in to place between attacks. I've got a rough sketch I made myself with a pen, and I should be able to scan and upload it if people like this idea.)
STR: 22 AGI: 18 INT: 15
Movement Speed 290
Str per Level 2.4
Agi per Level 1.8
Int per Level 1.8
Defense Information
Armor 2.5
Magic Armor 5.5
Attack Type Melee
Damage 45 - 55
Range 100
Attacks/Sec. 0.69
Skill 1
Leap of the Hungry
3486
The Fallen Ronin leaps into the air (over ca. 1sec) and smashes the ground, slicing everything before him.
If The Fallen successfully slices an enemy hero or units, he's able to repeat the Leap 1 / 1 / 2 / 3 times, each leap dealing 50 less
damage than the previous one. Each additional leap costs 25 mana and can only take place if the previous one succesfully hits.
Cast Range: 650
Radius: 180
Cooldown: 27 sec
Mana cost: 110 / 120 / 130 / 130
Damage: Physical 90 / 140 / 200 / 270
(This would sort of resemble the panda's cannonball, except it shouldn't be as high and not as "smashing". After flipping into the air, the hero pulls out both swords and swings them around himself. The cooldown between jumps should be half or 1 second, so enemies should be able to stop his leaping frenzy.)Skill 2
Demonic enhancement
3487
Every 6/5/4/2.5 seconds, after a successful meele attack,
The Fallen's demonic powers allow him to deal an aditional meele attack on the previous target.
Passive
The extra attack will never trigger attack effects (attack modifiers, bash and critical strike).
(I was using :jera:'s passive as a role skill for this one, then my friend kindly pointed out that this spell was sort of already in dota ( Nerubian Weaver) so I took the cooldowns from there. The cooldowns could be the same as for :jera: but then it should be able to trigger attack effects in my opinion, what do you think?)Skill 3
Wicked Bile
3489
The Fallen Ronin spits out a wicked, rotten bile on his enemies in front of him, disturbing their senses and weakening them due to the foul taint.
Deals 30 / 50 / 80 / 110 magic damage, -40% hit chance and -30% slow for 1.5 / 2.5 / 3.5 / 4.5 sec in a cone of 400 units away.
Cooldown: 18 sec
Mana cost: 70 / 80 / 90 / 100
Cast time: 0.2 sec
(I thought it would be rather cool if this spell would have some sort of a puking animation to it, where he'd quickly spit this rather nasty fluid in a cone the way he's facing.)
ultimate.
The Deamon's awakening
3488
The Fallen Ronin infuses his sword with the powers from the deamon dwelling within him, dealing additional 30 / 60 / 100 magic damage on every
successful meele attack, while gaining the 6th sense from the deamon, he has a 50% / 60% / 70% chance, when being struck by
a ranged or a meele attack, to strike back with a ranged touch attack. In an attempt to protect his host, the deamon also provides
him cover from incoming spells, negating 1/2/3 single targeted spells with a cooldown of 4.5 seconds.
Edit: An alternate idea to the demon's protection. When an enemy hero casts a single targeted spell on The Fallen Ronin, there's a 50% / 60% / 70% chance that a demonic figureen attacks the caster, dealing 50 / 100 / 150 magic damage and silencing the hero for 1 sec.
Duration: 12 / 16 / 20 sec
Mana Cost: 100 / 165 / 225
Cool down: 80 sec
(Let the smashing begin. This spell is thought to be his way of wrecking havoc. I'm still not sure about the spell negating thing, since it might be a bit overpowered, but it shouldn't be a bother to remove it. The ranged touch attack should look like there's a ghostly image emerging from the hero, dashing towards the enemy and striking him.)So. That's it. I don't have the time to make it fancy with too many colors or quotes so I'm gonna leave it like this. As I said, I have a picture I drew of him which I'm ready to scan and upload in a few days if people like the idea.
The role of the hero is pretty self-explaining so I'm going to let you figure it out. I'm all open for ideas, since I know he could be rather imbalanced, but I did my best to make him work out.
As for now, comment, flame, love me, whatever floats your boat, i will work on this submission furthermore if wanted, I just don't have the time right now.
EDIT: Done some fixes and coloring, bumping for glory and comments.
Much love:
http://jacklightfoot.files.wordpress.com/2008/10/samurai-zombie-assassin-smallflat.jpg
Desciption:
Before the great war, a wicked fighter known then by the name of Saito-Mundi, challenged a mysterious warrior, wearing an ancient armor, to a battle beyond comprehension.
After a brutal defeat, Saito-Mundi was approached by a demon. Being only limbs on the ground, he was offered life and powers beyond imagination. Driven by his thirst for revenge, he made the pact with the demon, only to witness his own soul being devoured by the foul beast.
Now, consumed by his lust for blood, the possesed Ronin has long forgotten his name and his true human nature, and now wonders New Earth, restlessly looking for revenge.
(In my opinion, the hero should have sort of a zombie/samurai look to him. His walking animation shouldn't be too smooth either. He carries 1 or 2 swords sheathed, drawing them quickly out as he attacks and seathing them back in to place between attacks. I've got a rough sketch I made myself with a pen, and I should be able to scan and upload it if people like this idea.)
STR: 22 AGI: 18 INT: 15
Movement Speed 290
Str per Level 2.4
Agi per Level 1.8
Int per Level 1.8
Defense Information
Armor 2.5
Magic Armor 5.5
Attack Type Melee
Damage 45 - 55
Range 100
Attacks/Sec. 0.69
Skill 1
Leap of the Hungry
3486
The Fallen Ronin leaps into the air (over ca. 1sec) and smashes the ground, slicing everything before him.
If The Fallen successfully slices an enemy hero or units, he's able to repeat the Leap 1 / 1 / 2 / 3 times, each leap dealing 50 less
damage than the previous one. Each additional leap costs 25 mana and can only take place if the previous one succesfully hits.
Cast Range: 650
Radius: 180
Cooldown: 27 sec
Mana cost: 110 / 120 / 130 / 130
Damage: Physical 90 / 140 / 200 / 270
(This would sort of resemble the panda's cannonball, except it shouldn't be as high and not as "smashing". After flipping into the air, the hero pulls out both swords and swings them around himself. The cooldown between jumps should be half or 1 second, so enemies should be able to stop his leaping frenzy.)Skill 2
Demonic enhancement
3487
Every 6/5/4/2.5 seconds, after a successful meele attack,
The Fallen's demonic powers allow him to deal an aditional meele attack on the previous target.
Passive
The extra attack will never trigger attack effects (attack modifiers, bash and critical strike).
(I was using :jera:'s passive as a role skill for this one, then my friend kindly pointed out that this spell was sort of already in dota ( Nerubian Weaver) so I took the cooldowns from there. The cooldowns could be the same as for :jera: but then it should be able to trigger attack effects in my opinion, what do you think?)Skill 3
Wicked Bile
3489
The Fallen Ronin spits out a wicked, rotten bile on his enemies in front of him, disturbing their senses and weakening them due to the foul taint.
Deals 30 / 50 / 80 / 110 magic damage, -40% hit chance and -30% slow for 1.5 / 2.5 / 3.5 / 4.5 sec in a cone of 400 units away.
Cooldown: 18 sec
Mana cost: 70 / 80 / 90 / 100
Cast time: 0.2 sec
(I thought it would be rather cool if this spell would have some sort of a puking animation to it, where he'd quickly spit this rather nasty fluid in a cone the way he's facing.)
ultimate.
The Deamon's awakening
3488
The Fallen Ronin infuses his sword with the powers from the deamon dwelling within him, dealing additional 30 / 60 / 100 magic damage on every
successful meele attack, while gaining the 6th sense from the deamon, he has a 50% / 60% / 70% chance, when being struck by
a ranged or a meele attack, to strike back with a ranged touch attack. In an attempt to protect his host, the deamon also provides
him cover from incoming spells, negating 1/2/3 single targeted spells with a cooldown of 4.5 seconds.
Edit: An alternate idea to the demon's protection. When an enemy hero casts a single targeted spell on The Fallen Ronin, there's a 50% / 60% / 70% chance that a demonic figureen attacks the caster, dealing 50 / 100 / 150 magic damage and silencing the hero for 1 sec.
Duration: 12 / 16 / 20 sec
Mana Cost: 100 / 165 / 225
Cool down: 80 sec
(Let the smashing begin. This spell is thought to be his way of wrecking havoc. I'm still not sure about the spell negating thing, since it might be a bit overpowered, but it shouldn't be a bother to remove it. The ranged touch attack should look like there's a ghostly image emerging from the hero, dashing towards the enemy and striking him.)So. That's it. I don't have the time to make it fancy with too many colors or quotes so I'm gonna leave it like this. As I said, I have a picture I drew of him which I'm ready to scan and upload in a few days if people like the idea.
The role of the hero is pretty self-explaining so I'm going to let you figure it out. I'm all open for ideas, since I know he could be rather imbalanced, but I did my best to make him work out.
As for now, comment, flame, love me, whatever floats your boat, i will work on this submission furthermore if wanted, I just don't have the time right now.
EDIT: Done some fixes and coloring, bumping for glory and comments.
Much love: