Flamefrost the "Frostburn Assassin"

[kimimaru`]

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Concept art:

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yeah, you've guessed it. It's Mileena from Mortal Kombat, I added the flames.

Role: Semi-Carry
Affiliation: Legion

Story:

Flamefrost was nothing more but a mere human whom of which, is a master of using the Kris. Seeing her abilities, Hephaestus (The God of Fire) and Shiva (The Goddess of Ice) tested her abilities by making her their assassin. Impressed by her results, Both Hephaestus and his sister, Shiva, blessed Flamefrost and gave her weapons the power of Ice and the power of Fire and which is now known as the Frostburn. The blessing that was cast upon her is now a curse to anyone who dares to destroy the land of fire and the land of ice is Newerth. Hearing rumors of a large army of daemons called the Hellbourne wanting to take over Newerth and destroy everything in it, Flamefrost quickly joined the Legion to help destroy the evil daemons.




Hero Details:


Base Attack:
Attack type: Melee
Damage: 50 - 58
Range: 128
Attack/Second: 0.72

Unit Details:
Hero name: Flamefrost
Primary Attribute: Agility

Strength: 20 Agility: 22 Intelligence: 17

Detailed Attributes:
Movement Speed: 310
Strength per level: 1.7
Agility per level: 3.0
Intelligence per level: 1.5

Defense Information:
Armor: 4.96
Damage Reduction: 23%
Magic Armor: 5.6
Magic Damage Reduction: 26%
Skills:

Skill #1:


Exploding Kris
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The Frostburn Assassin throws both of her Kris' to an enemy unit. The Kris of fire and the Kris of Ice.

Two effects:

I. Kris of Fire effect:


Level 1: Deals 80 damage to the target unit

Level 2: Deals 100 damage to the target unit

Level 3: Deals 120 damage to the target unit
Level 4: Deals 150 damage to the target unit

II. Kris of Ice effect:


Level 1: Slows the targeted unit by 10%

Level 2: Slows the targeted unit by 15%
Level 3: Slows the targeted unit by 20%
Level 4: Slows the targeted unit by 25%

Duration: 5/8/10 seconds
Cooldown: 20 seconds
Mana Cost: 100
Action: Target entity
Range: 700

Explanation:
When this skill is used, the Frostburn Assassin throws both of her Kris' to the targeted unit. From there, two explosions will occur, the first explosion would be from the Kris of Fire and the second one from the Kris of Ice. And the effects are stated above. After the explosion, the Frostburn Assassins' two Kris' will come back to her (looks like rexxar's axe throw).
Skill #2


Dual Defense
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Applies both Ice and Fire to her armor and reduces both physical and magical damage to her.

Magical Damage Reduction:


Level 1: Reduces magical damage by 5%

Level 2: Reduces magical damage by 7%
Level 3: Reduces magical damage by 9%
Level 4: Reduces magical damage by 12%

Physical Damage Reduction:


Level 1: Reduces physical damage by 5%

Level 2: Reduces physical damage by 7%
Level 3: Reduces physical damage by 9%
Level 4: Reduces physical damage by 12%

Action: Passive
Skill #3

Fire/Ice God's/Goddess's Blessing
The Frostburn Assassin can choose which blessing she will use on combat, she may either choose the Fire God's blessing or the Ice Goddess's blessing. And both blessing's have different effects.

Fire God's Blessing
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The Fire God blesses the right Kris (The Kris of Fire) and granting it unholy damage to the enemy.

Fire God's Blessing effect:


Level 1: Increases base damage by 5%

Level 2: Increases base damage by 10%
Level 3: Increases base damage by 15%
Level 4: Increases base damage by 20%

Ice Goddess's Blessing
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The Ice Goddess blesses the left Kris (the Kris of Ice) and granting it chilled effects to the enemy.

Ice God's Blessing effect:


Level 1: Slows the enemy unit by 5%

Level 2: Slows the enemy unit by 10%
Level 3: Slows the enemy unit by 15%
Level 4: Slows the enemy unit by 20%

Every attack of both Ice and Fire God's/Goddess's blessing will cost you 10 mana. (10 Mana / attack)

Note: You can only use one blessing at a time.

Skill #4

Fire and Ice charge
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Whenever her opponent uses a skill, whether it be Physical or Magical, the energy generated from it is absorbed by Flamefrost's body and stores it's power. When it is full, it unleashes a devastating effect on her body.

Maximum Charges: 10/15/20
Charge effects: (Effects/Charge)


Increases Base Damage by: 2

Increases Attack Speed by: 2%

Increases Movement Speed by: 2%

Increases Slow Effect by: 2%

Mana cost: 80
Cooldown: 30 seconds
Activation: Toggle
Duration: 15 seconds

[Sai]

The weapons are sai, not kris.

f u

[FulgoreSama]

Call me crazy but looking at her belt and bottom piece i see a face.

Edit: Was able to make a fast doodle to explain my possible insanity ill pm it to you in forum pm because Iunno how strict the inappropriate levels get for this forum/community. (Generalized message not to the OP)

Editx2: Scratch first edit.

[kimimaru`]

The weapons are sai, not kris.

f u

Yeah but it's just the "Concept" which means that's not really the weapon. Sai is good but a Kris looks cooler because of the curves it has.

[Festinen]

I don't think this one will make it. You already got similar heroes. Like magebane, dark lady.

Now my opinions regarding his skills. The ultimate is far to op! Increasing AS with 40% at max charges along with 40% movement speed + the massive slow effect with exploading kris = 20% + ice blessing 20% (if they stack which I think you want them to do otherwise this ability would be USELESS) + 40% slow from ulti. That means that they are frozen as long as you got mana.

[SkryZr]

Call me crazy but looking at her belt and bottom piece i see a face.




so true..

http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/2672/12551k7.jpg

[FulgoreSama]

Image Removed due to quick request: All good just thought id make it clear with my first post.

Just so you have the option to view.
http://img704.imageshack.us/img704/5733/face2.png

Anyways.

Her ultimate seems a bit much... Its obviously energy cell with armadon like buffing. Its very situational OP and underpowered.

A bad "Frostburn Assassin" could be totally wrecked while a badass one would never die. The other abilities just seem really bad due to just being item effects. It needs a rework.

Also way too much focus on this frostburn stuff, she's an assassin yet All i say is... Throwing her weapons, powering up through them and things like that? She'd also be just outdone.. Lack of good balance and good ideas.

[A`nub`is]

I don't know, but I feel like FulgoreSamas should remove his picture or make it a link simply because it kinda makes this topic a farce.

@hero:
Interesting concept!

Imho Fire God's Blessing need a little buff to be on pair with the Frost version.
Compare it to Andromeda's and Moonqueens ability.

[Lombar]

Unimaginative and does not adds anything to the game or metagame. I vote no.

[Zelfana]

Too much like Sand Wraith but actually worse. The only carry-like ability is the ultimate which works the same as Mana Battery, pretty dull.

PS. Nobody cares about what the hero would look like or even read the story at all, especially when you don't have any original ideas there.

[FulgoreSama]

Too much like Sand Wraith but actually worse. The only carry-like ability is the ultimate which works the same as Mana Battery, pretty dull.

PS. Nobody cares about what the hero would look like or even read the story at all, especially when you don't have any original ideas there.

Agreed with this guy here.

But heres what I could see actually for a small rework but its just an idea. Feel free to build upon it...


Make the throwing ability more into a attack modifier.

Fire and Ice; Hot and Cold:
"With Flamefrost's ability of fire and ice from the gods she can strike down her opponents with fiery wrath and icy vengeance"

or some **** like that
Might wanna tweak the numbers iunno but that'd probably be better.

Scrap the Dual Defense ****. She's a agi carry right? Let items deal with it tbh otherwise she's more of an agi tank. Maybe like

Just so you can keep something like Dual Stab so you can keep the rexxar like throw but different

Unnerving Strike:
"Flamefrost clashes her sai's or kris's (whatever) and stabs her opponent thus causing nerve damage to the opponent"

"Causing about... 20% slow and 50 magic damage per second maybe 75 for max for 8 seconds"

Switching between fire and ice.. Obviously a maliken mimic for life drain and speed. Lets fix this whilist giving a bit of that assassin feel to her.

Sand Swipe:
"Flamefrost being an agile assassin from the many years of training she knows that the environment is her friend in battle"

Maybe this can go like throwing dust in their eyes directly for... 15% chance to miss, perplexed? (or whatever it is for no items while affected) for about 2 seconds? maybe 5 max. with a 15 second cooldown (20 if u wanna tweak the numbers higher)

Now the ultimate I cant really think up anything due to there honestly being not many ideas for it but something that could revolve around using her full potential i guess. Hope this would be an okay rewrite. I know i might have mimiced something along the way but its honestly probably better in some way.

Edit: This is an overshooting idea I had its a bit of a mix of scout and swiftblade ultimates and even a lil tdl for shits n giggles but again dont have to use it.

Hot and your Cold: (lol katy perry anyone?) "Flamefrost has mastered mixing the uses of her enchanted kris's with her assassination teachings, she dips her weapons in crippling poison and jumps her opponent striking for 3/4/5 strikes with +40%/60%/80% Base Damage along with -50% attack speed"
Hope this somewhat helped. I had a lil fun with the idea making process though not most original feel free to use one or two of the ideas. I tried making her less item dependant as your skill set seems to yet giving her some synergy
P.S: Manacosts are up to you guys

Btw that ult for this hero would be a pretty nasty buff for armadon i just thought that :arma:

[Delvil]

Here's your reason: eat a dick. HEH

/emote pops collar, does a triple backflip into his Maserati, and screeches down the street.

[Static]

First off. Incredibly underpowered hero. A targetted slow that only does 150 damage when it's her only nuke?

Her other ability only gives her 20% base damage? (vs say, andro's aura) Granted, the slow is nice, but...meh.

As for her passive damage reduction, it's just kind of a bland skill. First off given her terrible damage and poor abilities, it's like sand wraith's dissipate...but doesn't go against true damage, and doesn't reflect onto enemies.

The ult...is just well...weak. With MAX charges at the highest level of ult, let's see what this gives:

+40 damage
+40 attack speed
+40% move speed
+40% slow (making a 60% slow, which is nice and all, but it's not really that great).

This requires TWENTY spells to be cast in the space of FIFTEEN seconds to get any of those bonuses. You know who can get more than those bonuses REALLY fast WITHOUT relying on enemies to cast a ton of spells? Armadon. And his slow reduces armor.

No offense, but...imagine playing this hero. It just...would be boring. And crappy.

I'd say: Either attach a stun to the nuke, or make it hit for 300 at max. As for the other bit: Make it increase your DAMAGE by 20%, not base damage. There's a massive difference.

After that, especially the second one, she'd be interesting to play.

[grEen_mIndEd]

w0w sexy assassin. . !!!