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Spaztastik
10-26-2009, 06:35 AM
After check out S2Bruce's site (http://www.bruceglidewell.com/) i see that most of his artwork is AMAZING! I want to see how many i can recreate for HoN

First up,


Vampiress
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Name - Vampiress
Class - Agility Melee
Affiliation - Hellbourne

Story
Up in the high mountains lies a dark and old yet Grand Manor. It is home to a family of which are not what many people would call normal. They drink blood, have hypnotizing stares yet they are the most beautiful humans in Newerth. However, they arnt even human, Vampiress is the youngest of her three sisters and finds pleasures in seducing her prey. She drains the blood out of the handsomest of men in Newerth and she does it with such elegance. Yes, Vampiress is not human at all.

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Feast - (Q)
The Vampiress cannot just let her foes escape, she must drain them for all they are worth. She is immune to magic spells and her attack speed is increased for a short period of time.
Level 1 - 30% Increased Attack Speed and Magic Immunity. Lasts for 2.5 seconds.
Level 2- 45% Increased Attack Speed and Magic Immunity. Lasts for 3.25 seconds.
Level 3 - 60% Increased Attack Speed and Magic Immunity. Lasts for 4 seconds.
Level 4 - 80% Increased Attack Speed and Magic Immunity. Lasts for 4.75 seconds.
Mana Cost: 75
Cooldown: 15

This ability synergizes with her Third ability to Increase heavy damage when she is in low health. the speed allows her to regenerate her health quickly so she is a hard target to kill.

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Seduce - (W)
The Vampiress can charm her way out of any disaster. She can seduce a target with her beauty. Seducing a target makes her untargetable to that target alone for a short period of time.
Level 1 - Seduced for 1.5 second
Level 2 - Seduced for 3 seconds
Level 3 - Seduced for 4.5 seconds
Level 4 - Seduced for 6 seconds
Mana Cost: 100/115/130/145
Cooldown: 15
- This ability does not silence the target
- AoE abilities do still affect Vampiress
- Passives still work on Vampiress

So basically, the target cant target attack her or use spells which can target her, instead if its someone like pyro or behemoth, they can aoe spell her and it would still damage her. This ability ONLY works on her meaning they are free to attack other heroes with no hassle. its more of a run away ability, or to stop them from attacking you whilst you deal major damage with ability 1 and 3

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Blood suck - (E) (Passive)
Attacking a foe heals The Vampiress. Depending on how much life she has lost, Vampiress heals by a percentage of that and deals the same amount to her foe. Blood suck is an exclusive Lifesteal modifier and does not stack.
Level 1 - 5% of all the life lost in lifesteal damage.
Level 2 - 10% of all the life lost in lifesteal damage.
Level 3 - 15% of all the life lost in lifesteal damage.
Level 4 - 20% of all the life lost in lifesteal damage.

Think maliken's 3rd ability, The less life he has, the faster his attack speed is. Now swap the attack speed with damage. The less life she has, the more she Lifesteals so it heals her more and damages them more. To balance it, when she has almost full health, this ability will barley do anything.
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Love Bite - (R)
Vampiress sinks her fangs into a foe, regenerating what she has lost. Vampiress and a target instantly swap health. This ability does not work if Vampiress' health goes below a certain percentage.
Level 1 - 33% hit point minimum.
Level 2 - 28% hit point minimum.
Level 3 - 23% hit point minimum.
Mana Cost: 300/200/100
Cooldown: 200/120/60
- Damage type: direct HP removal
- Interrupts channeling spells of the target.
- Magic immunity on the target or Vampiress will prevent that unit from having their HP changed. The other unit will still change its hp correctly.
- Casting range: 250

Last resort ability. Its more or less the same as Terror's ability except i increased the mana cost. When you are near death, just pop this baby on and they are a goner.This ability can also be used to help out team mates. When they are being chased and are on low health, use first ability to magic immune yourself then use this ability allowing them to be healed.
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So what do you guys think after reading everything?

Spaztastik
10-26-2009, 06:41 AM
Synergy and voice... etc will come later *reserved*

archkyle
10-26-2009, 07:11 AM
hmm, fun theme but the skills kinda are redundant to other heroes.

skill 1... pred has it because he's a semi naix port. attack speed is nice tho.

skill 2... cool idea, i would make it an aoe single target is kinda useless in a game with so much aoe.

skill 3... this is pretty much exatly pred's lifesteal...

ult. pretty cool and goes with the theme, always wanted a terrorbldae port.

all in all i would rethink most of this hero. theme is also redundant because of succubus. sorry, gonna have to t-down.

Manveru1
10-26-2009, 07:13 AM
Wow... I like the idea... The "untargetable" skill is quite nice though i personally would increase the duration a bit but it's only me :P And don't forget that its only numbers. Importing the Terrorblade ulti is a very fitting idea but the 3rd skill is already in so it rather must be changed. What about a life stealing aura? It would make her more team like and make her even more dangerous. As for me I can with clear conscience vote yes :)

Jaycoob
10-26-2009, 07:17 AM
I agree, Untergatable skill makes me want to try her out! also for Love bite, kinda remind me of Succubos/Atropos' Ulti! XD

t-up!

AtroCty
10-26-2009, 07:22 AM
Well, I like her. Good concept of a 1vs1 hero and keep it even in clashes. With her 3rd skill she is able to farm at begin, and being strong in late game.

I like her for now, especially with her Soul Keeper ultimate, where she can finally benefit of swapping health with an ally to save him >.>

T-Up! :D

Spaztastik
10-26-2009, 02:32 PM
if they are already pred's, what can i do to change them. She seems very synergized already, also changed seduced a bit

Spaztastik
10-27-2009, 08:21 AM
Bump

Skyve
10-27-2009, 08:32 AM
If I understand your passive lifesteal right, then it deals damage based on how much HP you are missing?

Which means if you have 2k life as your max hp and currently have 1k, you'll deal 200 bonus damage, and heal yourself for 200 hp? Seems a bit much.

The Ultimate would be great (imo) if you could also target allies, since that would synergize with her passive life-steal, and her ability to avoid damage (with both, Magic Immunity and Seduce), since you can have 100% of your own health, and use the ultimate on an ally while your magic immunity is active and change your allies health to 100%.

Spaztastik
10-27-2009, 08:37 AM
If I understand your passive lifesteal right, then it deals damage based on how much HP you are missing?

Which means if you have 2k life as your max hp and currently have 1k, you'll deal 200 bonus damage, and heal yourself for 200 hp? Seems a bit much.

The Ultimate would be great (imo) if you could also target allies, since that would synergize with her passive life-steal, and her ability to avoid damage (with both, Magic Immunity and Seduce), since you can have 100% of your own health, and use the ultimate on an ally while your magic immunity is active and change your allies health to 100%.

if you read the ult, thats what i wrote :)

Skyve
10-27-2009, 09:43 AM
if you read the ult, thats what i wrote :)

My bad :/

Thought it was only able to target enemies.

Spaztastik
10-28-2009, 03:27 AM
My bad :/

Thought it was only able to target enemies.

thats ok :P

inana
10-28-2009, 04:14 AM
sorry dude as much as I like your suggestion the your ultimate kinda killed it

Skill 1 - nothing special kinda like nai'x or is it the same?
Skill 2 - great ability but theme is kinda already used (Succ)

now this is why I voted no

Skill 3 - lifesteal that gets powerful as you run out of health.
Ulti - swap life.

see something wrong there?
those two skills are countering each other.

to help illustrate my point please read the scenario below

Scenario - at the beginning of a battle/clash her Blood Suck would be useless mid-way of that battle/clash she would have lost quite a lot of life and her blood suck would be quite helpful now but would you rather stick with a powerful life steal than simply swapping your life for someone else?

if you chose to swap life with someone then that would ruin the whole point of Blood Suck but if you stick with Blood Suck then why the hell does she even have Love Bite to begin with?

both skills are great. both can save you from dying but you can't do both and have to choose one skill to rely on for most of the times.

sorry dude maybe it's just me but I voted no.

Torguish
10-28-2009, 04:24 AM
I like this hero, i loved naix altho i wasnt very good with him. :D
Well hmm. let me think a bit.
About the first skill, i don't think Feast is the right word nor i think it fits the vampire theme, sounds more like devourers ultish but anyways. Maybe it's changed to something like ''Bloodrage'' etc.
Tho the concept is good but i'm thinking not so 1 to 1 skill with naix :) Somethink like
Debuff the enemy and when that enemy is struck she gets hp (For the blood spilled) So it would work a bit like naix's Open Wounds. Also i think Open wounds would be more like the Feastish kinda skill since all the allies get lifesteal from that enemy.
Altho i like the darn Magic immunity.. but it's just a suggestion :)

About the seduce; it's a nice balance about the AoE thing but since its a one to one skill (if you go for one hero it only disables it for you) i don't think the AoE balance is that much needed. Instead of make seduce to see that 1 target as your ally so if like Soul Reaper uses the damage/heal skill you will get healed and Shaman uses ''Healing wave'' you get healed. This WOULD tho unfortunetly make the ulti unuseful i know temporarily but it's a suggestion :)

Anyways, i'll keep you posted, this might have not been the best critisism but if it helps in anyway i'm glad :) I would like to see this hero imported into hon so T-up!
I need to continue some work so i will keep you posted. Inform me if you need something i will try to help! =)
Check also out Aseriel when you have the time :)

Skyve
10-28-2009, 04:46 AM
if you chose to swap life with someone then that would ruin the whole point of Blood Suck but if you stick with Blood Suck then why the hell does she even have Love Bite to begin with?

both skills are great. both can save you from dying but you can't do both and have to choose one skill to rely on for most of the times.You could always heal an ally that is at low health, and then use your lifesteal to heal yourself up. The Ultimate apparently has a lot more use if you use it defensively than offensively (with this skill build).

Bloodrage actually makes me think of an ability that could replace the life steal passive (I don't really like it, because it reminds me too much of Predator, who already stole that passive from Naix). Maybe give her bonus damage + lifesteal for a certain amount of time once her life drops below 40/50/60% of her max health. That way, you could wait for your opponent to attack you, get your life low, and then use ultimate to swap health, and drain him of his last bits of health.

inana
10-28-2009, 06:24 AM
You could always heal an ally that is at low health, and then use your lifesteal to heal yourself up. The Ultimate apparently has a lot more use if you use it defensively than offensively (with this skill build).

yeah but thats not what the skill is for right? she's suppose to be a
kick-ass carry and not a support hero. Sure you could use it (when I use terrorblade I do this to save my allies)

In my opinion a skill thats just a back up for another skill is pretty bad no matter how great that skill is

Spaztastik
10-28-2009, 06:32 AM
How about, instead of the life steal, she just does more damage when she has less health? that way she can use her ult just before she has too low health to survive?

inana
10-28-2009, 07:13 PM
How about you just port vipers nether toxin? she increase in damage if she's attacking someone with low health? that way her ulti compliments her third skill.

Audun
10-28-2009, 07:24 PM
no, there allrdy is a naix port in pred and a semiport of terror in maliken

Spaztastik
10-29-2009, 05:07 AM
no, there allrdy is a naix port in pred and a semiport of terror in maliken

how is maliken terrorblade at all????

Skyve
10-29-2009, 05:14 AM
no, there allrdy is a naix port in pred and a semiport of terror in maliken

The only thing Maliken and Terrorblade have in common is the Transformation ability, and since there is no such thing on this hero it's completely irrelevant.

Spaztastik
10-30-2009, 05:13 AM
The only thing Maliken and Terrorblade have in common is the Transformation ability, and since there is no such thing on this hero it's completely irrelevant.

thanks for that

UfotO
10-30-2009, 11:18 AM
I just love hot female characters so i go Yes :D