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Daaadom
08-24-2009, 11:43 AM
Changelog:
25.08.2009: Changed Numbers of Gravity Impact to be more balanced and decreased Gravity Field AOE to 350.
28.08.2009: Balanced Gravity Impact and Gravity Field


BARDIOC “Silver Back”



Varben Champion / Vernoc Master



MAGNUS PORT !!!



The Varben are a folk of intelligent silver backs living in a mountain range near the border to the“Hellbourne” territories. This mountains are nerved by a very rare crystal, which has immense influence to the magnetic-field. Over the last hundred years this crystals manipulated the gravity field in such strong way that the Varben grows superior strong and was forced to use an ancient technology called the Vernoc-technology. This technology give the Varben the ability to control the gravity field with mental powers. Their soldiers are mighty “silver back” warriors with a Vernoc-Power-Armor which give them the ability to focus their Vernoc-techniques and use themon the Battle field. The most feared of them is “Bardioc” one of their Vernoc-Masters.
The Varben folk is lead by a council of old Warriors, which decided to send their strongest warriorto face the threat of the “Hellbourne” which are crossing the border to get access to the gravitycrystals. The “Hellbourne” want to use the crystals to get a exhaustless energy source for their Shooktroopers (“Electrician”).







General look/style:



Bardioc should look like a mighty Gorilla Warrior with a fancy Cyber-Armor/Power-Armor,there should also be some nice gravity wave features. This is my first idea, but I am open for other ideas,if someone don’t like the “silver back” concept, the Varben could also be a folk of superstrong humans orhalf human half animal. Unfortunately I got no fancy image of a Gorilla Cyber Warrior … 8)



Style of Skills:



All of his skills should look like a kind of “Wave” and there must be a visual effect that his power armor amplify the mental powers of Bardioc.




ALL NUMBERS ARE BASED ON MAGNUS AND GOT SOME MINOR CHANGES,


ALSO THE MANACOSTS/CDs FOR SKILLS


SO NOTHING IS FIX AND CAN BE MODIFIED !!!


PICTURES ARE IN THE ATTACHMENTS!


http://img200.imageshack.us/img200/1993/bardioc.jpg
Range: 125 | Move Speed: 305
Primary: STR
Str: 21 + 2.8 | Agi: 15 + 1.8 | Int: 17 + 2.0
Damage: 51 – 61 | HP: 552 | Mana: 243
Armor: 4



http://img299.imageshack.us/img299/2299/vernocwave.jpg

Vernoc Wave:

Bardioc smashes his hands together and uses a special vernoc technique to send out a gravity shockwave dealing damage to everything in a straight line.

Level 1 - 75 damage.
Level 2 - 150 damage.
Level 3 - 225 damage.
Level 4 - 300 damage.
Mana Cost: 90
Cooldown: 11/10/9/8

The same spell like Magnus one (great for farming harassing in early-mid game)

http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/8039/gravityimpact.jpg

Gravity Impact:

Bardioc manipulate the gravity field around his immense arms and concentrate the energy of his power armor to deal massive damage with his next attacks, destroying everything in front of him.


Level 1 - +30% attack damage and
65% damage is splashed (300 AOE) for the next 2 attacks
Level 2 - +50% attack damage and
65% damage is splashed (300 AOE) for the next 2 attacks
Level 3 - +70% attack damage and
65% damage is splashed (300 AOE) for the next 3 attacks
Level 4 - +90% attack damage and 65% damage is splashed (300 AOE) for the next 4 attacks
Mana Cost: 40
Cooldown: 12


This is a new skill, which will synergies very good with his ulti and give him also a good farming Ability. Magnus don’t needed all this cleaving damage for the whole time (only for farm).
This is a concept to fusion two of his spells (Empower great cleave) to one spell that would fit him better.

http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/5841/gravityfield.jpg

Gravitation Field: (passive)

Bardioc creates a strong gravity field around him to weaken his enemies. All Enemies in a 300 AOE around Bardioc gets:

Level 1 - Reduces movement speed by 5%.
Level 2 - Reduces movement speed by 10%.
Level 3 - Reduces movement speed by 15%.
Level 4 - Reduces movement speed by 20%.
Mana Cost: N/A
Cooldown: N/A


It is the nearly the same like Omnis Degen Aura, but I think it would fit this hero much more … 8)
I think he don’t need the Cleaving damage ability … this ability would be much better for Team support, ganking and for the theme … !!!

http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/7199/vernocmastery.jpg

Vernoc Mastery:

Bardioc focus his Vernoc Power and creates a incredible strong gravity sphere in front of him and then let it collapse immediately, with the effect that all enemy units in 450 AOE are pulled in this
point dealing damage and stunning all units.


Level 1 - 2 second stun, deals 150 damage.
Level 2 - 3 second stun, dealing 225 damage.
Level 3 - 4 second stun, dealing 300 damage.
Mana Cost: 200/ 275/ 400
Cooldown: 120/110/100


Original the Magnus Ulti, not changes here, great skill and good team ulti, nothing to say about this.


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So this is the first version, tell me what you think, personally …. I love it, and it would be a very good port I think.

ATM i placed the pictures of the skills in the attachments,
until i upload them.

So … gimme your votes …. And bring Bardioc into the game … 8)

THX AND TAKE A LOOK AT MY CENTAUR PORT !!!

http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/showthread.php?t=16101

Daaadom
08-24-2009, 11:52 AM
So hello out there, my first Hero Port, and it is one of my favorite Heroes ... MAGNUS !!!

So i hope you like it and tell me what you think.

Manveru1
08-24-2009, 12:06 PM
Well nice concept...

Thumbs up

Tukkis
08-24-2009, 12:43 PM
Sounds pretty good. The degen aura is really overpowered though, 750 range??? Anyone?? Omni had barely 350 range with his aura.. I think we need degen aura in HoN, but not for Magnus, sorry. It would be too powerful.

Gravity impact is a nice merge. It would have to be nerfed though; the mana cost needs to be increased or the damage bonus drastically decreased. Maybe give the possibility to cast it on allies too so they would get the cleave effect (and ranged heroes do aoe dmg)? That would be really interesting.

I agree that Magnus port does no harm to HoN but your ideas need to be reworked.

Daaadom
08-25-2009, 02:31 AM
Well ... as i mentioned in my thread the Numbers can be adjusted,
here i see no problem, i also think that degen aura is powerfull and
need a nerf. I will change some numbers.

Important for me is, what you think about the concept, numbers can always be changed and balanced..

THX

Osterei
08-25-2009, 03:15 AM
T-UP i like the theme and style and the skillset is great, seems balanced for me,
bring it in, we need a nice MAGNUS port!!

Daaadom
08-25-2009, 04:38 AM
More More More ... 8)

choochoo`
08-25-2009, 10:13 AM
gorillas, which have better technology than humans, lov this heros and y we need MAGNUS PORT !!! =)

Daaadom
08-26-2009, 09:54 AM
More feedback plz ... 8)

THX

Daaadom
08-28-2009, 12:02 PM
Common ... 8( ... gimme some attention plz

Nihility
08-29-2009, 10:59 AM
is he the big woollie thing in dota with the ulti that pulls u in when casted ? ( soz its like been 5 months since i played dota...i forgot most of the chars there lol )

Daaadom
08-29-2009, 11:40 AM
Yes ... you are right ... that is he !!! ... 8)

Take a look at my Centaur rmk :

http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/showthread.php?p=213407&posted=1#post213407

Sufferr
08-29-2009, 12:15 PM
I liked the change on his passive to his active damage skill
giving u room for 1 more skill, awesome..

t-up
I love magnus and the new magnus ^^

flphi
08-29-2009, 12:35 PM
Not going to vote just yet but i think that degen might be a little unfitting for a magnus since hes such a hard hitter. just my opinion

love the concept tho and love magnus :D

Nome
08-29-2009, 02:43 PM
Rawr! Nomeasaur demands that this thread be remade with a public poll, as per the rules (http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/showthread.php?t=15759)! Nomeasaur also says "sorry for the inconvenience"!