Need feedback on my hero

[Judge_Light]

http://dream.heroesofnewerth.com/hero/Judge_Light/Zange

i havent published yet coz i'm not sure 100%

it's pretty original i think

i need feedback, either a better name for hero or a better name for skills, skill rework if its too imbalance, and an icon for the skill

please comment, thankyou
:)

[Koiuy]

The ultimate is very balanced IMO, average damage gained in mid-game would be 200, so x 2.25 = ranging from 400 - 700 < not too harsh. Plus a decent slow. So good job on that.
Quoting:
"activated automaticly", get rid of that.

I do not understand your first skill regarding its charges.
I do not understand your second skill completely. (Or that you run into a target and stun him for 3 seconds?)

[Judge_Light]

thank you

"very balanced", so i think i wont screw the ulti anymore

the 1st skill is like panda's flurry mechanicly, except it shoot a crecent moon blast in visual [read bleach? it's ichigo getsuga tenshou for visual,i'm inspired by that but only in visual]
it deals 60 per blast [300 commonly, 360 if you have time to blast 1 more charge, 5 seconds cooldown for +1 charge]

i dont know about the range but i think it far enough to reach the range creeps behind the melle one

the 2nd skill is like dark lady's charging strike [skill 3] in visual, but it stun the target
do a minor damage [even if you have 300 damage you only deal 30% = 90 damage]

for ex

A B C

A and b are enemy and c is my hero


after the skill

CA==B======

= the line of my strike
B Got stunned for 2 seconds received 30 damage [ex my damage is 300, 10% of it]
A Got stunned for 3 seconds received 90 damage [ex my damage is 300 ,30% of it]

3rd skill, did i need to rework that?
if you have that skill

if you do 1st skill at night, it give you movement speed [30% maximum = 6 charges for 8 seconds]

if you do 3rd skill at night, it give you invisibilty for 3 second after use it

so if you see up there the C will invisible for 3 second [for early game to combo it with ulti, need to channeling for 2 second]

and give you a better visibility at night [dota = balanar + aganim] to every allied heroes

yes my english sucks so i will work on it

i think this can be the next gen [rework maybe?] for balanar from dota to HoN

maybe

thank you

i need another comment

:)

[Judge_Light]

bump, i need more feedback before published it

[Judge_Light]

added skill icon
a little info for moonlight blessing

i really need more feedback please comment . . .

thank you

what i need:
a better name of hero or skills
a better icon for skill
any skill rework

[Gran`Guard]

i have to disagree with the ult being balanced, 400-700 damage in a 750 range in front of him...if this is to ANY enemy infront of him in the 750 range, this will become the most powerful AoE spell in the game, as it will hit for full damage on any target it hits.

no ult makes that amount of AoE damage, unless it lasts for the total duration, we can take Magmus?ult as example, it makes a total of 1100 magic damage during its activation time, but is easy to escape, if you have just a tad more speed than magmus or a stunning/slowing ability, you can stop this ult from doing more than about 220 magic damage.

another example is Chippers, which is one of the most damaging aoe attacks in the game at the moment, but in order to deal the wanted amount of damage, the heroes hits, basically have to STAND in it and not move out. which can easily be done if not placed completely right.

however numbers shouldn?t worry you that much as S2 will most likely balance them out, if your hero makes it that far.

the name of the hero is okay, "Zange" is easy to remember and many will remember it because of the "firebrand" version of Dota called Sange, dota version of frostburn= Sange & Yasha, most of your abilities are fine, but you make them overpowered with moonlight blessing, for example.

zange becomes invisible for 3 seconds after using his charge ability at night, this will make him the ultimate hero for escaping, he charges some units/stuns them and then becomes invisible. not only can?t they chase him due to the stun, but they wont even know what way he ran because of him being invisible.

i know it is only at night, but it is night half the game, be careful not to make his night abilities overpowered, and if you want to do that, you should make him underpowered during daytime to balance it out.

[Jaguar]

Bad vocabulary man :)

[Judge_Light]

So i think 1st and 2nd skill doesn't needed to rework ?

Changes at 3rd and 4th skill

added fade time and if zange received any damage during fade time, he wont invisible

as for the 4th skill, i remake it for a single target only, should i make this skill melee or ranged?

What in my mind is, in visual this hero shoot a shockwave to the target, after it hit the target, it splash into any enemy behind him making the target and any enemy hitted by splash to slowed [ex:willowmaker deadwood ulti but ranged],or i make it a melee so it really like deadwood ulti, except for the damage

[Judge_Light]

bump again, i need more feedback

[Koiuy]

O_o, I did not see the AoE =P. I take back about being balanced. I suggest get rid of the AoE.

EDIT: And you have.

[Judge_Light]

I have published it, please vote either good or bad

i make the ulti a melee one, so its like willowmaker

[Judge_Light]

bump bump ^_^

vote for my hero please

[Judge_Light]

Bump

[Judge_Light]

Bump. . .
Any sugestion or remake?

[Judge_Light]

Night bump

please feedback :)

[Judge_Light]

Bump bump

[Judge_Light]

I'm trying to make this guy playable
anyone wanted to help? Co op project?

Any assistance is needed, tq :)