If you give feedback on my hero I give feedback on yours!!!

[MATTANstyle]

This Is my hero http://dream.heroesofnewerth.com/hero/MATTANstyle/Tharus
I have done a rework on him and I want your feedback before I publish him http://dream.heroesofnewerth.com/hero/MATTANstyle/Tharus 2

It's my first hero so plz be nice.

I would like to know what I can change to make it better.
Would you want a metronome skill in HoN?


This is the second thread I post about it since a moderator closed. He said it was because I posted it in general dis. but I think he just didn't want it too become big and also posted his own hero so what do you belive?

Here is the other thread http://forums.heroesofnewerth.com/showthread.php?t=121225

Check out my annihilation http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0DecAbVq2xk

And plz Hold the thread alive!!!!

[MATTANstyle]

It's alive

[Tossing]

lol funny

[Jeppefarfar]

Well first of all, this hero looks it need som serious change and balancing. It has almost no Strenght at all, and with all that intelligence, what will you use? You only have 2 abilites that cost's mana. You should convert som Intelligence to Strenght for balance, this hero will die way to fast. And about the ulti, it has only 3 levels, not 4. And the amount of health thats heals you is to high, what if your team gets a genocide? It will heal you 2500 Hp, wich is more then your MAX hp. So for balancing i would suggest you change this things.
1. Change the name of your first ability ( i got the same skill name, LOL just kidding its awesome )
2. The only active ability that will be effected by Metronome is your Fake Death, wich isnt usefull 2 times. ( i guess )
3. I would even change the Metronome skill, what if you go this build ing the beginning?
lvl1, Power of the mind, lvl2, Metronome, Lvl3, Power of the mind, lvl4, Metronome, Lvl5 Power of the mind. It wouldnt work.
4. CHANGE the hp amount of your Ultimate.
So this is what i suggest, start over the Hero from the beginning. It will not take you long to make this hero again, and make changes! Keep being creativ!
/Jeppefarfar

[MATTANstyle]

thank you relly much jeppefarfar going to start on it now!!!!!

[MATTANstyle]

and the 4 lvl ulti is just me being tired

[VisualF]

Throw in some backstory!

It's nice how you've put the attack randomly from 30-70.

Ability 1 - Wow dude, 3 dmg per int every third attack is basically 1xINT damage each attack,
with no mana cost.. this is OP, but tweaking the numbers would make it work, right now its basically a +100% int damage 'aura'.

Ability 2 - Nice concept, unlike this http://dream.heroesofnewerth.com/hero/FalsepridE/Reflectionist (i'm not flaming, just using as an example) I've just read, you get a random skill instead of denying a spell and stealing it. I think it is a balanced idea.

Ability 3 - You can't simply become invulnerable.. picking a die animation from other heroes doesn't make sense since they are hardcore'd into their graphics I guess! Fake Death is actually a nice concept, maybe you could stop all attacks to him. Once he was attacked again, then come up with some effect that makes him run faster and loose for some time, giving him an escape mechanism. Something around this idea should work..

Ability 4 - Rethink about all numbers and you might have yourself a nice ult. (and ult only has 3 levels)

Overview: nice ideas, poor balancing.

[MATTANstyle]

Thank you VisualF I have made a 2.0 of him now and plz check him out.